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Post by hoosier on Dec 1, 2005 17:44:48 GMT -5
NO#1-
Under the Gun--Marty's "I told you so attitude"
Rub a Tub++for Karen backing Jim's cologne theory even though she wasn't thrilled
Doggone++Sonny's "smell me!"
Doggone - 47
Pilot - 41
Up on the Roof - 35
Marlon's Brando - 27
Dance With Me - 25
Seoul Man - 23
In Your Face-19
Under the Gun - 15
Four Feet Under-11
Fancy Footwork - 11
Past Imperfect - 9
Rub a Tub Tub - 3
Cancelled episodes:
1. Leap of Faith--this is very fortuitous, as I just watched this one last night! I would change Jim beating up scumbag Doyle. That is just wrong, and I'm sure now his confession won't stand up in court anyway. I would have it where the threat of the neighbor child testifying, and Jim being threatening without actually doing anything, is enough to make him confess to the one crime. Then, when it goes to trial, the publicity causes many other children to be willing to testify against him and the guy goes to jail for life. Also, I'd have Hank smell something interesting in the garbage, leading Karen to discover the claim check in the apartment, a bit of a star role for Hank. Finally, I would have drawn out the ethical debate of the cops around the claim ticket a bit more, that was the best part of this episode for me and one of the most interesting scenes in the entire series.[/quote]
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Post by hoosier on Dec 1, 2005 17:48:06 GMT -5
No. #2
Up on the Roof++the different version of the bank dream,Terry is still a wimp
Dance with Me++for Jim keeping his cool despite the cother couple's rude remark
Under the Gun--the smarmy lawyer, the smary lawyer's smarmy kid, the smarmy victim's mother and her "eco" resort!
Doggone - 47
Pilot - 41
Up on the Roof - 37
Marlon's Brando - 27
Dance With Me - 27
Seoul Man - 23
In Your Face-19
Under the Gun - 13
Four Feet Under-11
Fancy Footwork - 11
Past Imperfect - 9
Rub a Tub Tub - 3
Cancelled episodes:
1. Leap of Faith--this is very fortuitous, as I just watched this one last night! I would change Jim beating up scumbag Doyle. That is just wrong, and I'm sure now his confession won't stand up in court anyway. I would have it where the threat of the neighbor child testifying, and Jim being threatening without actually doing anything, is enough to make him confess to the one crime. Then, when it goes to trial, the publicity causes many other children to be willing to testify against him and the guy goes to jail for life. Also, I'd have Hank smell something interesting in the garbage, leading Karen to discover the claim check in the apartment, a bit of a star role for Hank. Finally, I would have drawn out the ethical debate of the cops around the claim ticket a bit more, that was the best part of this episode for me and one of the most interesting scenes in the entire series.[/quote][/quote]
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Post by inuvik on Dec 3, 2005 16:23:28 GMT -5
From Shmeep's Character Survival Game:
1--Time for rule change!!!!
From now on, you may only issue 1 + vote at a time, but you are still able to issue 2 -- votes. Don't worry. The game will still go on plenty long, but it will start to be easier to kill people off. You knew it had to come eventually.
I like this new rule, let's do it here too.
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Post by inuvik on Dec 3, 2005 16:29:24 GMT -5
Rub a Tub Tub -- Joan Tuxhorn was annoying
Under the Gun -- Jim losing his gun
Seoul Man -- for killing in order to save face/restore honor/etc.
Doggone - 47
Pilot - 41
Up on the Roof - 37
Marlon's Brando - 27
Dance With Me - 27
Seoul Man - 21
In Your Face-19
Under the Gun - 11
Four Feet Under-11
Fancy Footwork - 11
Past Imperfect - 9
Rub a Tub Tub - 1
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Post by inuvik on Dec 3, 2005 16:33:57 GMT -5
Four Feet Under --- the four of them arguing in publc when the body was found
Up on the Roof --- Karen not believing Jim about Terry
Fancy Footwork ---all that dancing!
Can't play the other game today, time is almost up at the library, but at least I managed to get on! Yay!
Doggone - 47
Pilot - 41
Up on the Roof - 35
Marlon's Brando - 27
Dance With Me - 27
Seoul Man - 21
In Your Face-19
Under the Gun - 11
Fancy Footwork - 9
Four Feet Under-9
Past Imperfect - 9
Rub a Tub Tub - 1
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Post by hoosier on Dec 3, 2005 16:53:20 GMT -5
Up on the Roof++for Jim visiting Terry in the hospital instead of sending someone else to get the answers he needed
Dance with Me--because Vic failed to see that Meg was a wit's end with Sylvia
Past Imperfect--Letitia's equally witless and clueless co-worker
Doggone - 47
Pilot - 41
Up on the Roof - 37
Marlon's Brando - 27
Dance With Me - 25
Seoul Man - 21
In Your Face-19
Under the Gun - 11
Fancy Footwork - 9
Four Feet Under-9
Past Imperfect - 7
Rub a Tub Tub - 1
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Post by hoosier on Dec 3, 2005 16:55:55 GMT -5
#2
Marlon's Brando--for Mark Watt nailing Jim as he came through the door
Under the Gun--because Kyle used his connections at the center to set up a drug deal for his friend and ended up getting him killed
Doggone++for the squad finally coming together
Doggone - 49
Pilot - 41
Up on the Roof - 37
Marlon's Brando - 25
Dance With Me - 25
Seoul Man - 21
In Your Face-19
Under the Gun - 9
Fancy Footwork - 9
Four Feet Under-9
Past Imperfect - 7
Rub a Tub Tub - 1
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Post by rducasey on Dec 3, 2005 17:02:32 GMT -5
OK I said I wouldn't kill anybody else, but I didn't say I wouldn't cancel an episode.
Rub a Tub Tub-- Marybeth, trying to get away with murder. How could she have gotten 3 men?
The Pilot ++ Beautiful from start to finish
Fancy Footwork-- Too much dancing and too much sunglass wearing.
Doggone - 47
Pilot - 43
Up on the Roof - 37
Marlon's Brando - 27
Dance With Me - 27
Seoul Man - 21
In Your Face-19
Under the Gun - 11
Four Feet Under-11
Fancy Footwork - 9
Past Imperfect - 9
Cancelled episodes:
1)Leap of Faith
2)Rub a Tub Tub
Marybeth and Eric made this one of my least favorite episodes "I get it, it just cops looking out for cops." yuck Marybeth. And I always feel a little uncomfortable watching Marty and Jim in the locker room with the bell conversation. Much too mean, even for Marty. And talk about close talkers. Back up. I do however really like the end of this episode with Jim trying to regain Christies trust. I love the Mulligan analogy, and love when she says "It was worth it, You're worth it. " and Jim saying "I'm not that person anymore." Nice. And the session with Galloway, chocolate chip cookies, also nice.
So why did I cancel it? I'm confused. But too late, I already did.
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Post by inuvik on Dec 4, 2005 16:36:03 GMT -5
Past Imperfect--for Ty Largent's lawyer, just the sort of behaviour we expect from lawyers (apologies to any lawyers on this board!)
Fancy Footwork--for Bo Matheson focusing on Jim as a just a blind guy
In Your Face++Jim playing chess
Doggone - 47
Pilot - 43
Up on the Roof - 37
Marlon's Brando - 27
Dance With Me - 27
Seoul Man - 21
In Your Face-21
Under the Gun - 11
Four Feet Under-11
Fancy Footwork - 7
Past Imperfect - 7
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Post by inuvik on Dec 4, 2005 16:40:56 GMT -5
#2 for today: Fancy Footwork--to get it down for someone who wants to rewrite it Past Imperfect--ditto. I know there are lots of writers out there! Under the Gun--I thought the whole crime part of this episode was very confusing, I found it hard to keep everyone and the plot straight (maybe I'm just dumb  who knows) Doggone - 47 Pilot - 43 Up on the Roof - 37 Marlon's Brando - 27 Dance With Me - 27 Seoul Man - 21 In Your Face-21 Four Feet Under-11 Under the Gun - 9 Fancy Footwork - 5 Past Imperfect - 5 |
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Post by inuvik on Dec 5, 2005 13:35:40 GMT -5
I'm not playing by myself here am I? That's no fun. I was the last person to play this!  There are way better writers out there than me, who I'm sure have excellent changes to the episodes (have I buttered everyone up now?  ) Past Imperfect -- Greg wasting Jim's work time when he wasn't even mugged Fancy Footwork -- last episode, that can never be forgiven! Marlon's Brando -- Nazi symbols and ideology Doggone - 47 Pilot - 43 Up on the Roof - 37 Dance With Me - 27 Marlon's Brando - 25 Seoul Man - 21 In Your Face-21 Four Feet Under-11 Under the Gun - 9 Fancy Footwork - 3 Past Imperfect - 3 |
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Post by inuvik on Dec 5, 2005 13:47:15 GMT -5
Fancy Footwork -- all you people who didn't like the dancing ending, here's your chance!
Past Imperfect -- ready for a rewrite
Four Feet Under -- child abuse is not a good topic, too Law and Order: SVU'ish
Doggone - 47
Pilot - 43
Up on the Roof - 37
Dance With Me - 27
Marlon's Brando - 25
Seoul Man - 21
In Your Face-21
Four Feet Under-9
Under the Gun - 9
Fancy Footwork - 1
Past Imperfect - 1
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Post by hoosier on Dec 5, 2005 17:45:21 GMT -5
Four Feet Under--for that bike messenger. Didn't he see Hank!!!
Seoul Man--Jim and Marty arguing on the street-come on guys your supposed to be professionals
Pilot+Jim memorizing the squad
Doggone - 47
Pilot - 44
Up on the Roof - 37
Dance With Me - 27
Marlon's Brando - 25
Seoul Man - 19
In Your Face-21
Four Feet Under-7
Under the Gun - 9
Fancy Footwork - 1
Past Imperfect - 1
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Post by hoosier on Dec 5, 2005 17:47:49 GMT -5
In Your Face--the belligerent look Todd's "john's" face after his questioning
Marlon's Brando--the stinky guy in the bathroom
Past Imperfect+Fisk calling the lawyer 'sweetheart'
Doggone - 47
Pilot - 44
Up on the Roof - 37
Dance With Me - 27
Marlon's Brando - 23
Seoul Man - 19
In Your Face-19
Four Feet Under-7
Under the Gun - 9
Fancy Footwork - 1
Past Imperfect - 3
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Post by inuvik on Dec 6, 2005 13:31:03 GMT -5
Past Imperfect--Letitia's brother for killing Ty Largent
Four Feet Under -- why didn't Hank smell the dead dog if Jim could?
Under the Gun--Jim calling Christie "baby"
Doggone - 47
Pilot - 44
Up on the Roof - 37
Dance With Me - 27
Marlon's Brando - 23
Seoul Man - 19
In Your Face-19
Under the Gun - 7
Four Feet Under-5
Fancy Footwork - 1
Past Imperfect - 1
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who knows)
There are way better writers out there than me, who I'm sure have excellent changes to the episodes (have I buttered everyone up now? 
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