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Post by rducasey on Dec 12, 2006 6:12:55 GMT -5
Blind Justice, The Saga in Limerick Detective Jim Dunbar was back on the job.
On his very first day he was met by a mob.
The day was exhausting-
But at home came the frosting,
When his lovely spouse, Christie, had missiles to lob."Back on a case?" she retorted. That jab hurt his pride.
Didn't she know to just be by his side?
A warm kiss and a squeeze
Would have helped to aleve
All that tension and stress that was churning inside. "You're going to do this now?"
(Please Christie, don't have a cow!)
I've had a rough day
I just want to play 
Instead I come home to a row. The perp's name was Randy
His hair, it was sandy
He underestimated Jim
His blindness won't stop him!
Was one of his victims named Mandy? Jim solved that first case in the blink of an eye
And pissed off ol' Marty, who was not a nice guy.
He'd make Jim's life a trial-
Barely cracking a smile.
Their head butting would only in-ten-si-fy.Randy Lyman the tongue-freak is gone
And Karen has learned Jim's no pawn.
But he still wants to know
Her eye color, so
She says "Brown" . . . and he smiles and walks on.End of Pilot Episode 2 In the second episode, Four Feet Under
Jim Dunbar committed his very first blunder.
Marty can't let him forget
That he dug up Lloyd's pet.
Was he going to fail now?, we had to wonder. A trip to the good Dr. was on tap for this day.
But it couldn't interfer with a party with Clay.
He changed the appointment
To Fisk's disappointment.
But promised to keep it, the following day.TBC Now, take it away! I took out the pictures from the first episode to keep it from being too long, and we've all seen them. So maybe after each episode we can remove the pics. |
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Post by rducasey on Dec 12, 2006 17:48:25 GMT -5
Blind Justice, The Saga in Limerick Detective Jim Dunbar was back on the job.
On his very first day he was met by a mob.
The day was exhausting-
But at home came the frosting,
When his lovely spouse, Christie, had missiles to lob."Back on a case?" she retorted. That jab hurt his pride.
Didn't she know to just be by his side?
A warm kiss and a squeeze
Would have helped to aleve
All that tension and stress that was churning inside. "You're going to do this now?"
(Please Christie, don't have a cow!)
I've had a rough day
I just want to play
Instead I come home to a row. The perp's name was Randy
His hair, it was sandy
He underestimated Jim
His blindness won't stop him!
Was one of his victims named Mandy? Jim solved that first case in the blink of an eye
And pissed off ol' Marty, who was not a nice guy.
He'd make Jim's life a trial-
Barely cracking a smile.
Their head butting would only in-ten-si-fy.Randy Lyman the tongue-freak is gone
And Karen has learned Jim's no pawn.
But he still wants to know
Her eye color, so
She says "Brown" . . . and he smiles and walks on.End of Pilot Episode 2 In the second episode, Four Feet Under
Jim Dunbar committed his very first blunder.
Marty can't let him forget
That he dug up Lloyd's pet.
Was he going to fail now?, we had to wonder.A trip to the good Dr. was on tap for this day.
But it couldn't interfer with a party with Clay.
He changed the appointment
To Fisk's disappointment.
But promised to keep it, the following day.We need a Clay's Party one hereOnly the second episode and the second big fight,
Gave us a picture of the Dunbar's marriage plight.
His infidelity was spoken
How his marriage vows had broken.
He'd better get used to the couch tonight. |
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Post by Katryna on Dec 12, 2006 22:07:19 GMT -5
I added one for Clay's Party... Blind Justice, The Saga in Limerick Detective Jim Dunbar was back on the job.
On his very first day he was met by a mob.
The day was exhausting-
But at home came the frosting,
When his lovely spouse, Christie, had missiles to lob."Back on a case?" she retorted. That jab hurt his pride.
Didn't she know to just be by his side?
A warm kiss and a squeeze
Would have helped to aleve
All that tension and stress that was churning inside. "You're going to do this now?"
(Please Christie, don't have a cow!)
I've had a rough day
I just want to play
Instead I come home to a row. The perp's name was Randy
His hair, it was sandy
He underestimated Jim
His blindness won't stop him!
Was one of his victims named Mandy? Jim solved that first case in the blink of an eye
And pissed off ol' Marty, who was not a nice guy.
He'd make Jim's life a trial-
Barely cracking a smile.
Their head butting would only in-ten-si-fy.Randy Lyman the tongue-freak is gone
And Karen has learned Jim's no pawn.
But he still wants to know
Her eye color, so
She says "Brown" . . . and he smiles and walks on.End of Pilot Episode 2 In the second episode, Four Feet Under
Jim Dunbar committed his very first blunder.
Marty can't let him forget
That he dug up Lloyd's pet.
Was he going to fail now?, we had to wonder.A trip to the good Dr. was on tap for this day.
But it couldn't interfer with a party with Clay.
He changed the appointment
To Fisk's disappointment.
But promised to keep it, the following day. Jim went to Clay's party that night.
To stand all alone was his plight.
Clay made his advances
Jim jumped at his chances
His beer in Christie's lap led to their fight. Only the second episode and the second big fight,
Gave us a picture of the Dunbar's marriage plight.
His infidelity was spoken
How his marriage vows had broken.
He'd better get used to the couch tonight. |
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Post by rducasey on Dec 13, 2006 5:59:49 GMT -5
Blind Justice, The Saga in Limerick Detective Jim Dunbar was back on the job.
On his very first day he was met by a mob.
The day was exhausting-
But at home came the frosting,
When his lovely spouse, Christie, had missiles to lob."Back on a case?" she retorted. That jab hurt his pride.
Didn't she know to just be by his side?
A warm kiss and a squeeze
Would have helped to aleve
All that tension and stress that was churning inside. "You're going to do this now?"
(Please Christie, don't have a cow!)
I've had a rough day
I just want to play
Instead I come home to a row. The perp's name was Randy
His hair, it was sandy
He underestimated Jim
His blindness won't stop him!
Was one of his victims named Mandy? Jim solved that first case in the blink of an eye
And pissed off ol' Marty, who was not a nice guy.
He'd make Jim's life a trial-
Barely cracking a smile.
Their head butting would only in-ten-si-fy.Randy Lyman the tongue-freak is gone
And Karen has learned Jim's no pawn.
But he still wants to know
Her eye color, so
She says "Brown" . . . and he smiles and walks on.End of Pilot Episode 2 FOUR FEET UNDER In the second episode, Four Feet Under
Jim Dunbar committed his very first blunder.
Marty can't let him forget
That he dug up Lloyd's pet.
Was he going to fail now?, we had to wonder.A trip to the good Dr. was on tap for this day.
But it couldn't interfer with a party with Clay.
He changed the appointment
To Fisk's disappointment.
But promised to keep it, the following day. Jim went to Clay's party that night.
To stand all alone was his plight.
Clay made his advances
Jim jumped at his chances
His beer in Christie's lap led to their fight.Only the second episode and the second big fight,
Gave us a picture of the Dunbar's marriage plight.
His infidelity was spoken
How his marriage vows had broken.
He'd better get used to the couch tonight. [/quote] Tom and Marty had another perp in mind
But Jim and Karen, the real perp they'd find
They grilled Crider's wife
Got him thirty to life
And it was evident Jim could do the job blind.But his achievement was soon bittersweet
Arriving home to hear of Christie's retreat
He walked to the park
Sat alone in the dark
And a fade to black as both their hands meet.  End of Episode 2, Now on to Rub a Tub TubThanks Kathy for the contribution at Clay's party. Good job. Maggie, put down that work, and get busy here . "I need you, like the flowers need the rain" Inuvic, Hoosier, come on now, you were doing great. Lori, MLM, mouse, and Anita, you limerick writers , you. If someone wants to pick a whole episode, let me know and I'll save it for you. A start for episode 3: I'll remove episode 2 pictures tonight. Episode 3 RUB A TUB TUB
This one opened with Marty and the drawer-
Leaving Jim and his leg mighty sore.
It you think that was enough
The going only got rough
"I'll buy some bells" cut Jim to the core. |
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Post by inuvik on Dec 13, 2006 13:07:34 GMT -5
Blind Justice, The Saga in Limerick Detective Jim Dunbar was back on the job.
On his very first day he was met by a mob.
The day was exhausting-
But at home came the frosting,
When his lovely spouse, Christie, had missiles to lob."Back on a case?" she retorted. That jab hurt his pride.
Didn't she know to just be by his side?
A warm kiss and a squeeze
Would have helped to aleve
All that tension and stress that was churning inside. "You're going to do this now?"
(Please Christie, don't have a cow!)
I've had a rough day
I just want to play
Instead I come home to a row. The perp's name was Randy
His hair, it was sandy
He underestimated Jim
His blindness won't stop him!
Was one of his victims named Mandy? Jim solved that first case in the blink of an eye
And pissed off ol' Marty, who was not a nice guy.
He'd make Jim's life a trial-
Barely cracking a smile.
Their head butting would only in-ten-si-fy.Randy Lyman the tongue-freak is gone
And Karen has learned Jim's no pawn.
But he still wants to know
Her eye color, so
She says "Brown" . . . and he smiles and walks on.End of Pilot Episode 2 FOUR FEET UNDER In the second episode, Four Feet Under
Jim Dunbar committed his very first blunder.
Marty can't let him forget
That he dug up Lloyd's pet.
Was he going to fail now?, we had to wonder.A trip to the good Dr. was on tap for this day.
But it couldn't interfer with a party with Clay.
He changed the appointment
To Fisk's disappointment.
But promised to keep it, the following day. Jim went to Clay's party that night.
To stand all alone was his plight.
Clay made his advances
Jim jumped at his chances
His beer in Christie's lap led to their fight.Only the second episode and the second big fight,
Gave us a picture of the Dunbar's marriage plight.
His infidelity was spoken
How his marriage vows had broken.
He'd better get used to the couch tonight. [/quote] Tom and Marty had another perp in mind
But Jim and Karen, the real perp they'd find
They grilled Crider's wife
Got him thirty to life
And it was evident Jim could do the job blind.But his achievement was soon bittersweet
Arriving home to hear of Christie's retreat
He walked to the park
Sat alone in the dark
And a fade to black as both their hands meet. Episode 3 RUB A TUB TUB
This one opened with Marty and the drawer-
Leaving Jim and his leg mighty sore.
It you think that was enough
The going only got rough
"I'll buy some bells" cut Jim to the core.A body was found--more death!
The wife was named Mary Beth
It wasn't a strain
To find blood in the drain
I need a rhyme--crystal meth! |
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Post by rducasey on Dec 13, 2006 16:09:12 GMT -5
Blind Justice, The Saga in Limerick Detective Jim Dunbar was back on the job.
On his very first day he was met by a mob.
The day was exhausting-
But at home came the frosting,
When his lovely spouse, Christie, had missiles to lob."Back on a case?" she retorted. That jab hurt his pride.
Didn't she know to just be by his side?
A warm kiss and a squeeze
Would have helped to aleve
All that tension and stress that was churning inside. "You're going to do this now?"
(Please Christie, don't have a cow!)
I've had a rough day
I just want to play
Instead I come home to a row. The perp's name was Randy
His hair, it was sandy
He underestimated Jim
His blindness won't stop him!
Was one of his victims named Mandy? Jim solved that first case in the blink of an eye
And pissed off ol' Marty, who was not a nice guy.
He'd make Jim's life a trial-
Barely cracking a smile.
Their head butting would only in-ten-si-fy.Randy Lyman the tongue-freak is gone
And Karen has learned Jim's no pawn.
But he still wants to know
Her eye color, so
She says "Brown" . . . and he smiles and walks on.End of Pilot Episode 2 FOUR FEET UNDER In the second episode, Four Feet Under
Jim Dunbar committed his very first blunder.
Marty can't let him forget
That he dug up Lloyd's pet.
Was he going to fail now?, we had to wonder.A trip to the good Dr. was on tap for this day.
But it couldn't interfer with a party with Clay.
He changed the appointment
To Fisk's disappointment.
But promised to keep it, the following day. Jim went to Clay's party that night.
To stand all alone was his plight.
Clay made his advances
Jim jumped at his chances
His beer in Christie's lap led to their fight.Only the second episode and the second big fight,
Gave us a picture of the Dunbar's marriage plight.
His infidelity was spoken
How his marriage vows had broken.
He'd better get used to the couch tonight.Tom and Marty had another perp in mind
But Jim and Karen, the real perp they'd find
They grilled Crider's wife
Got him thirty to life
And it was evident Jim could do the job blind.But his achievement was soon bittersweet
Arriving home to hear of Christie's retreat
He walked to the park
Sat alone in the dark
And a fade to black as both their hands meet. Episode 3 RUB A TUB TUB
This one opened with Marty and the drawer-
Leaving Jim and his leg mighty sore.
It you think that was enough
The going only got rough
"I'll buy some bells" cut Jim to the core.The DOA was a cop from anit-crime
Who's partner was a bit of a slime
His wife slept around
So when the body was found
It was Jim's job to see who'd do time. A body was found--more death!
The wife was named Mary Beth
It wasn't a strain
To find blood in the drain
I need a rhyme--crystal meth!Thanks Inuvik, that's great! But if you don't mind I added one before it, and maybe sneak a few more stanzas in the middle since your scene is near the end of the episode. And maybe someone (you) wants to do the final scene, The flowers for Christie? |
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Post by inuvik on Dec 13, 2006 16:35:32 GMT -5
Thanks Inuvik, that's great! But if you don't mind I added one before it, and maybe sneak a few more stanzas in the middle since your scene is near the end of the episode. And maybe someone (you) wants to do the final scene, The flowers for Christie? Absolutely, I don't mind! I am not a concrete sequential--I write 'em as I think of 'em, and not in any order beyond the correct episode. And please, anyone else join in--not sure about the flower scene, I lay no claim to it. |
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Post by Katryna on Dec 13, 2006 22:00:53 GMT -5
Blind Justice, The Saga in Limerick Detective Jim Dunbar was back on the job.
On his very first day he was met by a mob.
The day was exhausting-
But at home came the frosting,
When his lovely spouse, Christie, had missiles to lob."Back on a case?" she retorted. That jab hurt his pride.
Didn't she know to just be by his side?
A warm kiss and a squeeze
Would have helped to aleve
All that tension and stress that was churning inside. "You're going to do this now?"
(Please Christie, don't have a cow!)
I've had a rough day
I just want to play
Instead I come home to a row. The perp's name was Randy
His hair, it was sandy
He underestimated Jim
His blindness won't stop him!
Was one of his victims named Mandy? Jim solved that first case in the blink of an eye
And pissed off ol' Marty, who was not a nice guy.
He'd make Jim's life a trial-
Barely cracking a smile.
Their head butting would only in-ten-si-fy.Randy Lyman the tongue-freak is gone
And Karen has learned Jim's no pawn.
But he still wants to know
Her eye color, so
She says "Brown" . . . and he smiles and walks on.End of Pilot Episode 2 FOUR FEET UNDER In the second episode, Four Feet Under
Jim Dunbar committed his very first blunder.
Marty can't let him forget
That he dug up Lloyd's pet.
Was he going to fail now?, we had to wonder.A trip to the good Dr. was on tap for this day.
But it couldn't interfer with a party with Clay.
He changed the appointment
To Fisk's disappointment.
But promised to keep it, the following day. Jim went to Clay's party that night.
To stand all alone was his plight.
Clay made his advances
Jim jumped at his chances
His beer in Christie's lap led to their fight.Only the second episode and the second big fight,
Gave us a picture of the Dunbar's marriage plight.
His infidelity was spoken
How his marriage vows had broken.
He'd better get used to the couch tonight.Tom and Marty had another perp in mind
But Jim and Karen, the real perp they'd find
They grilled Crider's wife
Got him thirty to life
And it was evident Jim could do the job blind.But his achievement was soon bittersweet
Arriving home to hear of Christie's retreat
He walked to the park
Sat alone in the dark
And a fade to black as both their hands meet. Episode 3 RUB A TUB TUB
This one opened with Marty and the drawer-
Leaving Jim and his leg mighty sore.
It you think that was enough
The going only got rough
"I'll buy some bells" cut Jim to the core.The DOA was a cop from anit-crime
Who's partner was a bit of a slime
His wife slept around
So when the body was found
It was Jim's job to see who'd do time.Jim called on his old snitch named Sonny,
who would do anything for some money.
To Jim Sonny complained
Till Karen had to explain
That what Jim had endured that past year wasn't funny. A body was found--more death!
The wife was named Mary Beth
It wasn't a strain
To find blood in the drain
I need a rhyme--crystal meth! |
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Post by rducasey on Dec 13, 2006 22:08:48 GMT -5
Blind Justice, The Saga in Limerick Detective Jim Dunbar was back on the job.
On his very first day he was met by a mob.
The day was exhausting-
But at home came the frosting,
When his lovely spouse, Christie, had missiles to lob."Back on a case?" she retorted. That jab hurt his pride.
Didn't she know to just be by his side?
A warm kiss and a squeeze
Would have helped to aleve
All that tension and stress that was churning inside. "You're going to do this now?"
(Please Christie, don't have a cow!)
I've had a rough day
I just want to play
Instead I come home to a row. The perp's name was Randy
His hair, it was sandy
He underestimated Jim
His blindness won't stop him!
Was one of his victims named Mandy? Jim solved that first case in the blink of an eye
And pissed off ol' Marty, who was not a nice guy.
He'd make Jim's life a trial-
Barely cracking a smile.
Their head butting would only in-ten-si-fy.Randy Lyman the tongue-freak is gone
And Karen has learned Jim's no pawn.
But he still wants to know
Her eye color, so
She says "Brown" . . . and he smiles and walks on.End of Pilot Episode 2 FOUR FEET UNDER In the second episode, Four Feet Under
Jim Dunbar committed his very first blunder.
Marty can't let him forget
That he dug up Lloyd's pet.
Was he going to fail now?, we had to wonder.A trip to the good Dr. was on tap for this day.
But it couldn't interfer with a party with Clay.
He changed the appointment
To Fisk's disappointment.
But promised to keep it, the following day. Jim went to Clay's party that night.
To stand all alone was his plight.
Clay made his advances
Jim jumped at his chances
His beer in Christie's lap led to their fight.Only the second episode and the second big fight,
Gave us a picture of the Dunbar's marriage plight.
His infidelity was spoken
How his marriage vows had broken.
He'd better get used to the couch tonight.Tom and Marty had another perp in mind
But Jim and Karen, the real perp they'd find
They grilled Crider's wife
Got him thirty to life
And it was evident Jim could do the job blind.But his achievement was soon bittersweet
Arriving home to hear of Christie's retreat
He walked to the park
Sat alone in the dark
And a fade to black as both their hands meet. Episode 3 RUB A TUB TUB
This one opened with Marty and the drawer-
Leaving Jim and his leg mighty sore.
It you think that was enough
The going only got rough
"I'll buy some bells" cut Jim to the core.The DOA was a cop from anit-crime
Who's partner was a bit of a slime
His wife slept around
So when the body was found
It was Jim's job to see who'd do time.Jim called on his old snitch named Sonny,
who would do anything for some money.
To Jim Sonny complained
Till Karen had to explain
That what Jim had endured that past year wasn't funny.A body was found--more death!
The wife was named Mary Beth
It wasn't a strain
To find blood in the drain
I need a rhyme--crystal meth!All those Galloway visits can be very trying
Especially when Jim Dunbar practices lying-
The doc opens his eyes
To a possible marriage demise
So to the nearest florist he's off and flying. Jim's home, with an armful of flowers
To atone for those long stressful hours.
Her wrath will dull again
With his hopeful Mulligan
As he calls upon all of his powers.He thanks her for hanging in there
And says she has nothing to fear
He's not the same man
Who strayed with Anne
"I promise" he said, and does care.Kathy, Karma for the one about Sonny, and I borrowed the final scene from Maggies previous post on Limericks, and added to it. Thanks Mags, And Karma to Inuvik too. End of Episode 3. |
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Post by Katryna on Dec 14, 2006 5:31:29 GMT -5
Blind Justice, The Saga in Limerick Detective Jim Dunbar was back on the job.
On his very first day he was met by a mob.
The day was exhausting-
But at home came the frosting,
When his lovely spouse, Christie, had missiles to lob."Back on a case?" she retorted. That jab hurt his pride.
Didn't she know to just be by his side?
A warm kiss and a squeeze
Would have helped to aleve
All that tension and stress that was churning inside. "You're going to do this now?"
(Please Christie, don't have a cow!)
I've had a rough day
I just want to play
Instead I come home to a row. The perp's name was Randy
His hair, it was sandy
He underestimated Jim
His blindness won't stop him!
Was one of his victims named Mandy? Jim solved that first case in the blink of an eye
And pissed off ol' Marty, who was not a nice guy.
He'd make Jim's life a trial-
Barely cracking a smile.
Their head butting would only in-ten-si-fy.Randy Lyman the tongue-freak is gone
And Karen has learned Jim's no pawn.
But he still wants to know
Her eye color, so
She says "Brown" . . . and he smiles and walks on.End of Pilot Episode 2 FOUR FEET UNDER In the second episode, Four Feet Under
Jim Dunbar committed his very first blunder.
Marty can't let him forget
That he dug up Lloyd's pet.
Was he going to fail now?, we had to wonder.A trip to the good Dr. was on tap for this day.
But it couldn't interfer with a party with Clay.
He changed the appointment
To Fisk's disappointment.
But promised to keep it, the following day. Jim went to Clay's party that night.
To stand all alone was his plight.
Clay made his advances
Jim jumped at his chances
His beer in Christie's lap led to their fight.Only the second episode and the second big fight,
Gave us a picture of the Dunbar's marriage plight.
His infidelity was spoken
How his marriage vows had broken.
He'd better get used to the couch tonight.Tom and Marty had another perp in mind
But Jim and Karen, the real perp they'd find
They grilled Crider's wife
Got him thirty to life
And it was evident Jim could do the job blind.But his achievement was soon bittersweet
Arriving home to hear of Christie's retreat
He walked to the park
Sat alone in the dark
And a fade to black as both their hands meet. Episode 3 RUB A TUB TUB
This one opened with Marty and the drawer-
Leaving Jim and his leg mighty sore.
It you think that was enough
The going only got rough
"I'll buy some bells" cut Jim to the core.The DOA was a cop from anit-crime
Who's partner was a bit of a slime
His wife slept around
So when the body was found
It was Jim's job to see who'd do time.Jim called on his old snitch named Sonny,
who would do anything for some money.
To Jim Sonny complained
Till Karen had to explain
That what Jim had endured that past year wasn't funny.A body was found--more death!
The wife was named Mary Beth
It wasn't a strain
To find blood in the drain
I need a rhyme--crystal meth!All those Galloway visits can be very trying
Especially when Jim Dunbar practices lying-
The doc opens his eyes
To a possible marriage demise
So to the nearest florist he's off and flying.Jim's home, with an armful of flowers
To atone for those long stressful hours.
Her wrath will dull again
With his hopeful Mulligan
As he calls upon all of his powers.He thanks her for hanging in there
And says she has nothing to fear
He's not the same man
Who strayed with Anne
"I promise" he said, and does care.I could not resist starting this one...which requires TWO screencaps! Episode 4, Marlon's Brando  Jim is awakened by Christie's advance.
Her touch signals her need for romance.
Mood broken by his phone...
Why can't he leave it alone?
To be continued tonight? Not a chance. 
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Post by Katryna on Dec 14, 2006 5:38:54 GMT -5
Karma to you, Mary, for starting this Limerick re-cap!
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Post by rducasey on Dec 14, 2006 6:08:51 GMT -5
Blind Justice, The Saga in Limerick Detective Jim Dunbar was back on the job.
On his very first day he was met by a mob.
The day was exhausting-
But at home came the frosting,
When his lovely spouse, Christie, had missiles to lob."Back on a case?" she retorted. That jab hurt his pride.
Didn't she know to just be by his side?
A warm kiss and a squeeze
Would have helped to aleve
All that tension and stress that was churning inside. "You're going to do this now?"
(Please Christie, don't have a cow!)
I've had a rough day
I just want to play
Instead I come home to a row. The perp's name was Randy
His hair, it was sandy
He underestimated Jim
His blindness won't stop him!
Was one of his victims named Mandy? Jim solved that first case in the blink of an eye
And pissed off ol' Marty, who was not a nice guy.
He'd make Jim's life a trial-
Barely cracking a smile.
Their head butting would only in-ten-si-fy.Randy Lyman the tongue-freak is gone
And Karen has learned Jim's no pawn.
But he still wants to know
Her eye color, so
She says "Brown" . . . and he smiles and walks on.End of Pilot Episode 2 FOUR FEET UNDER In the second episode, Four Feet Under
Jim Dunbar committed his very first blunder.
Marty can't let him forget
That he dug up Lloyd's pet.
Was he going to fail now?, we had to wonder.A trip to the good Dr. was on tap for this day.
But it couldn't interfer with a party with Clay.
He changed the appointment
To Fisk's disappointment.
But promised to keep it, the following day. Jim went to Clay's party that night.
To stand all alone was his plight.
Clay made his advances
Jim jumped at his chances
His beer in Christie's lap led to their fight.Only the second episode and the second big fight,
Gave us a picture of the Dunbar's marriage plight.
His infidelity was spoken
How his marriage vows had broken.
He'd better get used to the couch tonight.Tom and Marty had another perp in mind
But Jim and Karen, the real perp they'd find
They grilled Crider's wife
Got him thirty to life
And it was evident Jim could do the job blind.But his achievement was soon bittersweet
Arriving home to hear of Christie's retreat
He walked to the park
Sat alone in the dark
And a fade to black as both their hands meet. Episode 3 RUB A TUB TUB
This one opened with Marty and the drawer-
Leaving Jim and his leg mighty sore.
It you think that was enough
The going only got rough
"I'll buy some bells" cut Jim to the core.The DOA was a cop from anit-crime
Who's partner was a bit of a slime
His wife slept around
So when the body was found
It was Jim's job to see who'd do time.Jim called on his old snitch named Sonny,
who would do anything for some money.
To Jim Sonny complained
Till Karen had to explain
That what Jim had endured that past year wasn't funny.A body was found--more death!
The wife was named Mary Beth
It wasn't a strain
To find blood in the drain
I need a rhyme--crystal meth!All those Galloway visits can be very trying
Especially when Jim Dunbar practices lying-
The doc opens his eyes
To a possible marriage demise
So to the nearest florist he's off and flying.Jim's home, with an armful of flowers
To atone for those long stressful hours.
Her wrath will dull again
With his hopeful Mulligan
As he calls upon all of his powers.He thanks her for hanging in there
And says she has nothing to fear
He's not the same man
Who strayed with Anne
"I promise" he said, and does care.Episode 4 Up On The Roof Station Break here for Maggie to do an Opus.(fingers crossed.)Kathy Wrote: I could not resist starting this one...which requires TWO screencaps! Episode 4, Marlon's Brando Jim is awakened by Christie's advance.
Her touch signals her need for romance.
Mood broken by his phone...
Why can't he leave it alone?
To be continued tonight? Not a chance. Why Kathy, you rascal, I love your beginning to Marlon's! But Kathy, Marlon's is episode five. You could lose your membership here for not knowing that. I am only kidding you, but we must leave it, and perhaps do Marlons next. Because episode 4 Up On The Roof, is screaming out for an opus from Maggie. So let's just leave it and she can insert it when her head is above water again. And now on to Marlon's. Thanks again for that great beginning to another fave episode. I must leave these for a bit, as I have soooooooo much to do. Maybe we'll pick this up tonight, unless it's fashion week in PA?
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Post by Katryna on Dec 14, 2006 6:33:42 GMT -5
Why Kathy, you rascal, I love your beginning to Marlon's! But Kathy, Marlon's is episode five. You could lose your membership here for not knowing that. I am only kidding you, but we must leave it, and perhaps do Marlons next. Because episode 4 Up On The Roof, is screaming out for an opus from Maggie. So let's just leave it and she can insert it when her head is above water again. And now on to Marlon's. Thanks again for that great beginning to another fave episode. I must leave these for a bit, as I have soooooooo much to do. Maybe we'll pick this up tonight, unless it's fashion week in PA.
Anyone else, feel free to jump in. Cut me some slack- I was doing this at 5 a.m. Besides I knew that Maggie would want to take the entire UoTR segment herself....please forgive me. (Now hanging my head in shame and embarassment.) |
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Post by rducasey on Dec 14, 2006 7:03:30 GMT -5
Why Kathy, you rascal, I love your beginning to Marlon's! But Kathy, Marlon's is episode five. You could lose your membership here for not knowing that. I am only kidding you, but we must leave it, and perhaps do Marlons next. Because episode 4 Up On The Roof, is screaming out for an opus from Maggie. So let's just leave it and she can insert it when her head is above water again. And now on to Marlon's. Thanks again for that great beginning to another fave episode. I must leave these for a bit, as I have soooooooo much to do. Maybe we'll pick this up tonight, unless it's fashion week in PA.
Anyone else, feel free to jump in. Cut me some slack- I was doing this at 5 a.m. Besides I knew that Maggie would want to take the entire UoTR segment herself....please forgive me. (Now hanging my head in shame and embarassment.) Of course, my child, I forgive you. And so does Father Flynn.  |
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Post by maggiethecat on Dec 14, 2006 9:32:35 GMT -5
Me? Take the entire UotR opus? What do you think I am, some sort of board hog? Nah, you gals are bopping right along, so go for it. I did a bunch of UoTR limericks before, so when you get to the end of the episode, please re-post the four-stanza one I wrote for the river scene -- I don't think I can do better than that one.  I am so loving this sequential idea, by the way . . . as long as when we finish FF, no one thinks "we're done here." 
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