FanFic Update: Before There Was Darkness

[Duchess of Lashes]

It's been a while coming, but Chapter Twelve of Before There Was Darkness is finally finished (I think) and is posted at the following URL:

www.fanfiction.net/s/2510488/12/

Like all the other fic writers out there, I like feedback, critical or otherwise, so please feel free to let me know what you think!

LongLashes

[mlm828]

Care to share your cure for writer's block? (I read your post at "Shades of Blue"). It obviously worked! I love the way you are giving us the answer to the question, "What did Jim and Christie see in each other?" Already looking forward to the next installment (but no pressure. . . ).

[shmeep]

Yay for Chapter 12! That was a *ahem!* satisfying read! Beautiful story and I love the progression of Jim and Christie's relationship. So true to character, and yet different enough for it to be easy to imagine that this was the two of them before so many other things happened to them. Their young love is realistically played out and very sweet.