Before There Was Darkness - New Chapter

[Duchess of Lashes]

Chapter 16 is now finished - (and I also thank Shmeep so much for her honest critique - it got me past the rough parts) - and posted at FanFiction.net at the following link:

www.fanfiction.net/s/2510488/16/

As you already know, feedback is so appreciated - here or there!

LongLashes

[hoosier]

Wow! Seeing what Jim had to contend with. Verbal and emotional abuse is often worse than physical abuse. Physical you can maybe fight back against but how do you fight back against words? Seeing what he has had to overcome and how closely beneath the surface it still lurks just waiting to hit him again. Please, keep it coming!!!