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Post by kenina on Nov 20, 2005 9:42:17 GMT -5
I had a sneek peek at this one, but it's changed some since then, so I'll tell you again that I enjoyed it. I like fics where we get to see cases, because it reminds me that much more of the actual show. And it's impressive to me whenever a fanfic author can create a case that I find believable. So thanks for continuing to write B/J fic for us. Looking forward to what comes next.
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dott
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Post by dott on Nov 20, 2005 10:14:23 GMT -5
Wonderful to see the mention of Andy as squad commander at the 15th.
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Post by Eyphur on Nov 20, 2005 22:46:30 GMT -5
Great Story. Please write more very soon. Now that I'm actually awake and have had time to reflect on this I will add more. I think that this is an interesting topic to explore: Jim (and the others) reaction to a blind victim. And this is my 100th post. Wow.  |
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Post by mlm828 on Nov 30, 2005 21:40:51 GMT -5
Chapter 3 has been posted at ff.net: www.fanfiction.net/s/2661645/3/I am really enjoying this one, especially the twists in the case in this chapter. It's like a "bonus" episode of the show. Looking forward to more! |
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Post by hoosier on Dec 3, 2005 17:29:23 GMT -5
Loved the plot twist in #3! Can hardly wait for the next installment!
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Post by anna on Dec 8, 2005 18:09:01 GMT -5
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Post by bjobsessed on Dec 10, 2005 23:32:18 GMT -5
This is really good and I agree with mlm. It's like a bonus episode of the show. Nice to see Jim and Marty getting along. Kind of ironic that Jim and Marty are working together on a case where blind guys are being killed and he was so hostile to Jim in the beginning. Funny how things work out.
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Post by anna on Dec 11, 2005 21:39:27 GMT -5
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Post by bjobsessed on Dec 11, 2005 22:05:11 GMT -5
Great chapter! I thought Jim kept his cool pretty well when Andy suggested he take a desk job. Don't keep us waiting too long to find out what the lead is.
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