Before There Was Darkness - Part Eighteen

[Duchess of Lashes]

This has been such a long drought but I think I finally had a brief moment of inspiration! And so it is that Jim's saga of meeting the Sullivans for the first time continues!

Part Eighteen of Before There Was Darkness is now complete and posted both here and at FanFiction.net at the following link:

www.fanfiction.net/s/2510488/18/

As always, your feedback is so greatly appreciated!

[bjobsessed]

Wow Lori. That was really good. I love the way the two conversations were in contrast to one another. The uncomfortable first meeting with father-in-law to be and the relaxed conversation with Christie. You tied the two together so well with Jim's doubts about being able to provide for her.

[hoosier]

I'm so glad you had your burst of inspiration! I was hoping to read more in this story and you came through big time! Yeah!

[carl1951]

Thank you Lori. A long wait indeed! And worth it!

Later, Carl