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Post by Duchess of Lashes on Sept 7, 2006 12:28:26 GMT -5
Is that it? The story has come to an end? If it is, I'm really disappointed in that it was just toooooo short! Thanks for penning such a tense, bumpy ride - it was definitely fun!
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Post by Dreamfire on Sept 7, 2006 19:17:13 GMT -5
Hi Lori,
I am glad you found it a tense and bumpy ride. Wouldn't want you falling asleep over there!
As for your dissapointment that it was too short - Christie's story is done, the poor girl needs a rest. But don't fret, keep an eye out for the wrap up of Smoke and Mirrors, where Jim and Karen get even more serious about hunting down the man behind it all.
Cheers, Natascha
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Post by Duchess of Lashes on Sept 7, 2006 20:19:13 GMT -5
Oh, don't worry - I haven't forgotten about Smoke and Mirrors! I'll be watching for it!
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Post by bjobsessed on Sept 7, 2006 21:30:34 GMT -5
Hey N,
That was awesome and full of tension. It was worth the wait. I'm with Lori. Too short! Can't wait for Smoke and Mirrors.
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Post by anna on Sept 7, 2006 21:33:19 GMT -5
Christie's story is done, the poor girl needs a rest. But, but, but . . . what happened to Christie's hands? How does she feel about Jim finding out some of the things written in her diary? Great story!
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Post by bjobsessed on Sept 7, 2006 21:37:21 GMT -5
Christie's story is done, the poor girl needs a rest. But, but, but . . . what happened to Christie's hands? How does she feel about Jim finding out some of the things written in her diary? Great story! I forgot about the diary. Good questions, Anna. I guess that's part of what makes it a good story. It leaves you wondering and guessing.
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Post by rducasey on Sept 8, 2006 6:11:15 GMT -5
Natasha, thanks for that exciting conclusion. I loved it. It was so full of tension. Looking forward to Smoke and Mirrors. Don't stop, please.
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Post by hoosier on Sept 8, 2006 17:43:49 GMT -5
Oooooh, exciting to the very last minute! You had me cringing there for Hank, poor brave baby. I could almost feel the cold wind ripping through that railway yard. Great stuff. Looking forward to more in Smoke and Mirrors ;D
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