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Post by Colorado girl on Mar 21, 2007 23:16:21 GMT -5
I am enjoying the story, Mlm. I can't hardly wait for more. You are so good at writing.
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Post by Chris on Mar 22, 2007 5:33:11 GMT -5
I am at a loss of words, unlike you MLM, you have a way with words that makes me want to go chanting and doing happy dances with Eyphur  LOVE it, and that little detour into Fisk's barbecue is great, like everyone else, I'm wondering what's gotten into Dunbar - he must have known doing something like the Braille instructions was bound to piss off Christie... I totally agree with you, Anita, I too hope that there are not too many commercials in this show!! Take care and keep smiling - Chris  - did I mention, I karmaed you, MLM?? |
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Post by rducasey on Mar 22, 2007 6:25:03 GMT -5
I am so enjoying your story Martha and can't wait for more. Karma to you. I'm sure it must be so frustrating as Jim says, "to have no control over his life". Seems like he was always waiting for someone to do something that he would prefer doing himself. And leave it to Christie to jump right on that braille note hours later. Somehow I can see him saying "We should talk about Sunday." and Christie saying "we don't have to." Keep up the good work. I love your stories.
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Post by shmeep on Mar 22, 2007 10:49:48 GMT -5
Excellent! You are inside all of their heads and the feeling that something is going to erupt between Jim and Christie is growing. Great job with all the angst. I loved how you showed Jim almost achieving a normal day with his coworkers only to have a few jarring events there to remind him that he can't have a normal day the way he wants to. Great stuff.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 22, 2007 13:27:29 GMT -5
Okay, I'm here at work all alone.
I've nothing to do and mlm is keeping us waiting.........
*sigh*
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Post by bjobsessed on Mar 22, 2007 13:35:08 GMT -5
Okay, I'm here at work all alone. I've nothing to do and mlm is keeping us waiting......... *sigh* Maybe she's starting a new pattern. Meet the New Boss had something new every other day. This one has had something two days in a row. Isn't it nice to be wanted? ;D |
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Post by Chris on Mar 23, 2007 11:54:26 GMT -5
I have a little piece of advice for Christie: Go get Sat Nav!!! Then you have a voice to tell both of you where you are going  - Chris |
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Post by mlm828 on Mar 23, 2007 13:48:21 GMT -5
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Post by bjobsessed on Mar 23, 2007 17:03:01 GMT -5
Another great chapter. Feels like you're setting up for something. (I know--another robbery). I'm sure there's more to it because you're full of surprises. Nice to see Jim apologize too. Still wondering why directions in braille though--or maybe that doesn't matter. Who knows? Maybe it's a case of me thinking too much. ;D
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Post by hoosier on Mar 23, 2007 17:18:03 GMT -5
It was nice to see the squad interacting outside the squad for a change. And Jim's frustration and anger, or more annoyance, at Christie? Instead of "embracing" his blindness he seems to be more at odds with it than ever. You just know they couldn't tie it up in a neat little bow as the finale seemed to suggest. Glad to see you carrying his adjustment to his situation on beyond the series. Great.
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Post by krissie on Mar 23, 2007 18:30:30 GMT -5
I've just caught up. Some of the detail with Jim and Christie is just perfect! The friction between them... The frustration...
And there's action, with the promise of more to come.
<Happy sigh.>
Krissie
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Post by Dreamfire on Mar 23, 2007 21:39:01 GMT -5
I like seeing the bad guy for once, it really draws me in. Feels like a regular day at the squad and the homage to Jim's request for a Mulligan was just great. Jim's admission that maybe he hasn't come as far as she thinks is very cool, and sounds very true to character. Enjoying the story, N |
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Post by maggiethecat on Mar 24, 2007 17:28:35 GMT -5
Everything we have come to expect from your most excellent fic, mlm -- crisp, savvy, honoring the characters while taking them to that desired next level. Each chapter is better than the last, and leaves us panting for more. ;D Thank you!  |
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Post by mlm828 on Mar 25, 2007 14:52:41 GMT -5
I have posted Chapter Four in the Fan Fiction section. It's also at ff.net: www.fanfiction.net/s/3451065/4/Some questions may be answered, but there may be some new ones, too. Edited to add: "Spoilers" may follow. |
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Post by Chris on Mar 25, 2007 15:14:51 GMT -5
This is terrific!!! Marty and Tom stared at Fletcher, speechless. I am too!!!! Martha, sweetie, you can't leave us hanging like this, once again I feel like I am hanging off the edge of a cliff with my fingernails just the way I was when you wrote Meet the New Boss. Slick. All the time I was wondering if Jim will suddenly flash back to the bank. No real reason except that it involves an armored car robbery. Please don't make us wait too long!  And now we know why Love it, love it, LOVE IT!!! So karma-worthy Take care and keep smiling - Chris |
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