Post by Dreamfire on Feb 13, 2008 20:37:34 GMT -5
It’s coming up to Valentine’s Day so I thought, what the hell. About 2 years ago when I first met up with you guys and the board I secretly tried my hand at fanfic. As expected my first fic was a full on Mary Sue ( For those who don’t know, a Mary Sue is where you write a wish fulfillment story where the hero meets up with a person who bears a striking resemblance to the writer… etc.) It is set a year or more after the show left off, Jim has divorced from Christie and so he is a free agent. So, in the absence of any new fic to offer, in the spirit of Valentine’s Day and because I know some of you will enjoy it, even if it is totally self-indulgent. Here is
At the 8th, the rain poured down outside, heavy and cold.
After staring too long at the wet street below, Detective Karen Bettancourt found that the windows framing her view started to look like bars. She tore her eyes away, stretched the kink from her neck and looked around the squad. Stark light spilled out of the Lieutenant’s door onto Tom’s back, and then dribbled dark shadows onto Marty’s desk and the floor. The Boss’s voice was a low buzz as he took a call inside.
Half an hour of running ideas on this case file though her head, and it was going nowhere, just like this day. Karen tossed the file onto the reviewed pile and stood, stretching out her limbs and yawning. Hank followed her yawn with one of his own and then returned to snoring.
Statistically there were less murders and felonies committed during long periods of inclement weather. Great – the perps were on vacation but she had to work! With the heaviest New York rainfall in decades, the Boss said it was the perfect time to stay in house, review cold cases, and see if they could come up with any new angles. Her partner, Detective Jim Dunbar, had backed the Lieutenant; apparently his old squad had done this with good results. Well, it wasn’t Karen’s idea of fun.
Not even the fluorescent lights could keep the blue walls from being dark and droll; she imagined this is what it would be like in a submarine. Trapped and stale, the air seemed over-filtered and damp, and the people seemed to introvert, and flatten like cardboard cutouts. The guys looked surreal, almost slow motion. Cabin fever, Marty called it. The usual sounds of the squad were muted, constant rain on the windows melding with the tapping of keys, murmurs of conversation and the sound of papers being turned. A steady, low key snore came out the holding cell, counterpoint duet to the dog snore. The drunk had turned himself in and even Desk Sergeant Watts hadn’t the heart to send him outside again.
Karen pulled another file from the large stack at the window but didn’t open it. Instead she counted umbrellas making their way down the street. She sketched a frowny face on the fogged-up window pane. Was the rain lessening? She looked at her watch, only seven minutes since she had last looked. Whether she had cabin fever or whatever, she needed to get out, perhaps another trip to the coffee shop on the corner for Mocha Latte. She brightened. “Anyone want another coffee?”
Detective Marty Russo’s staccato of hunting and pecking at the keyboard was suspended. “Yeah, I’ll have a Latte.” He pulled a bill from his pocket, folded it into an airplane and sent it over. It landed right in front of her. She was impressed; he must have had practice.
Detective Tom Selway, on the phone, just shook his head.
Jim didn’t hear her. Earpiece in, typing faster than she found comfortable to watch, he seemed oblivious to the outside world. Karen tapped him on the shoulder. “Coffee?” she asked loud enough to cut through the electronic voice reading the words back to him. He turned and smiled at her without missing a stroke on the keyboard, and then, after a moment, shook his head.
Lieutenant Fisk called out from his office. “Dunbar, you up for the next one?”
“Ah, yep.” Jim stopped typing immediately, pulled out his earpiece and headed for the Lieutenant’s office, stepping neatly around Karen as she pulled on her coat.
The boss came out of his office, glasses half way down his nose, scribbling a note. Karen stopped Jim with a hand on his shoulder. “How come you hear him and not me?” she asked, half-curious, half-annoyed.
Was she starting that one again? Shrugging off her question, Jim took another step toward the Lieutenant’s office, but the pressure on his shoulder returned. She wanted to discuss this now? He threw her a questioning frown. “What - ?”
She interrupted him, “He’s coming here.” The whisper emerged from under her breath, somewhere around his shoulder.
“Thanks.” Jim sent a rueful smile in her direction before he turned back and faced the Lieutenant. “What have we got?”
“DOA fished out of the river near Williamsburg Bridge, ID says he’s Craig Newland,” the Lieutenant read off a fluorescent sticky note. He held out the note toward Jim but Karen reached around and grabbed it. “Better give that to me, Boss.” She stepped up next to her partner.
Fisk looked from Jim to Karen; both detectives had the same half smile on their faces.
“Ah… right.” He headed straight back to his office.
“Jim, you want us to run the name while you and Karen go check the scene?” Marty grinned widely but kept his voice straight.
Tom’s head jerked up. “What are you doing?” he asked silently gesturing toward the windows.
Marty pointed at his partner and then to the deluge outside. “You wanna go?” he mouthed.
Tom threw an apologetic look Karen’s way and shook his head.
“Sure, thanks.” Jim slapped his thigh and Hank jumped up, stretching and yawning. Jim smiled as Hank’s tail beat happily on his leg. “Good boy, you ready to go hunt a perp?” Hank looked up at Karen, as eager to get out of the squad as she had been a few minutes ago. Jim reached for the harness and turned to Karen. “Let’s get rolling.”
Karen couldn’t keep the dismay from her face. The river? That was nothing like a warm and dry coffee shop. God she hated getting wet. She looked out the window. Was the rain easing? No. If anything it seemed to be getting worse. Karen’s eyes flicked between the window and her partner and his dog as they headed toward the elevator. Was Jim aware of the deluge outside? Did he have any idea what he had just put them up for? Her shoulders slumped. It probably didn’t matter; he wouldn’t let a little thing like a 40 day flood get between him and a case.
At the gate, Hank and Jim turned together. “Coming?”
Had that been a smile on Jim’s face? Sometimes he hid them behind his glasses and she couldn’t tell. She glared at him as he turned away, realized her scowl could never hit the mark and transferred it to Marty, smacking his money on his desk on her way out. “Smart ass – don’t look so smug.”
“Hey, it’s Dunbar’s case!” Marty couldn’t keep the laugh out of his voice. He raised his arms and tried an innocent expression, but it dissolved into an unequivocal grin.
Jim was still smiling as Hank stopped at the elevator. Reviewing cold cases could be very effective; it could also be as dreary as dog shit. He’d rather be out, no matter the weather.
Jim squatted by the body. His latex gloved hand moved from the neck to the shoulder and then followed the man’s extended arm, up over the head and into the river. When he reached the wrist, Jim pulled the hand from the water and touched the spaces where the middle and ring fingers should have been. “You can’t tell if they’ve been eaten or cut?”
Karen shook her head. “No.” Her voice was swept away by the wind.
Jim turned his head to try and catch her answer. The umbrella hadn’t moved; she was still there. Had she answered or left him hanging? Was she still considering? Not knowing her expression, or if her attention was elsewhere, Jim waited. The rain slapped the river loudly and he found it hard to filter out the constant drone under the umbrella. “Karen?”
Seeing the frown and confusion as they chased each other across his face, Karen raised her voice above the rain, “Sorry, Jim, no.”
“Okay, I’ve got a pretty good picture of what we got.” Jim placed the hand on the man’s chest, safe for now from the hungry river. Jim stood, while behind his back, the arm slid smoothly back over the still cold chest, past the head and slipped silently into the water again. “No disturbance on the grass, no blood or debris, just a washed up body?” Jim queried.
“Yep, not the crime scene, just a landing place,” Karen agreed.
“I guess he’s lucky. With the river so swollen, he could have sunk or floated straight out to the Atlantic.”
“Lucky?” Karen’s tone was dry.
Jim grinned. He’d said she had a fair sense of humor; his opinion had changed over the last months; hers was a fairly wicked sense of humor.
“You done here? ‘Cause I’d really like to get out of this rain. Even the squad seems cheerful and cozy compared to this.” She looked at the dead man on the riverbank. Her thoughts were dark and somber. He was someone’s son, someone’s lover, someone’s friend, a once-good looking man, who made a cold and repellant corpse.
“ME here yet?” Jim shouted to be heard above the rain.
Karen was grateful to be interrupted in her thinking. “No, let’s get back to the road, though. I’ve seen enough.” She took a last look at the body: head downhill, arms outstretched as if to dive into the river again.
The man who had found the body, had dragged him bare feet first, up the bank twelve inches or so, but the rising river was working to reclaim its prize. Male, 5’10’’, jeans and a long sleeved t-shirt with patches of what looked like a pale grey, now brown with river mud, face up, blonde hair, dark roots, and blue eyes open and staring blankly, Karen shuddered at the description as she fixed it in her head. She watched while Jim stripped his latex gloves and poked them into a pocket. “Here.” She brushed her arm past Jim’s hand and was glad for the warmth that began to flow from his grip. Despite the freezing air, he seemed impervious to the cold. Together they moved back up the slope away from the river.
At the roadside above, the ME van arrived. Three people jumped out to survey the scene, Deputy ME Jennifer Shelby and Assistant ME’s Des and Jessie. It was a long drop to the river itself. Apart from a few steps near the top, the bank looked steep and treacherous. Whole sections of bank were being dislodged and washed away. The waves lapped at the body, tasting it and eager to swallow it whole.
Who’s The Valentine?
At the 8th, the rain poured down outside, heavy and cold.
After staring too long at the wet street below, Detective Karen Bettancourt found that the windows framing her view started to look like bars. She tore her eyes away, stretched the kink from her neck and looked around the squad. Stark light spilled out of the Lieutenant’s door onto Tom’s back, and then dribbled dark shadows onto Marty’s desk and the floor. The Boss’s voice was a low buzz as he took a call inside.
Half an hour of running ideas on this case file though her head, and it was going nowhere, just like this day. Karen tossed the file onto the reviewed pile and stood, stretching out her limbs and yawning. Hank followed her yawn with one of his own and then returned to snoring.
Statistically there were less murders and felonies committed during long periods of inclement weather. Great – the perps were on vacation but she had to work! With the heaviest New York rainfall in decades, the Boss said it was the perfect time to stay in house, review cold cases, and see if they could come up with any new angles. Her partner, Detective Jim Dunbar, had backed the Lieutenant; apparently his old squad had done this with good results. Well, it wasn’t Karen’s idea of fun.
Not even the fluorescent lights could keep the blue walls from being dark and droll; she imagined this is what it would be like in a submarine. Trapped and stale, the air seemed over-filtered and damp, and the people seemed to introvert, and flatten like cardboard cutouts. The guys looked surreal, almost slow motion. Cabin fever, Marty called it. The usual sounds of the squad were muted, constant rain on the windows melding with the tapping of keys, murmurs of conversation and the sound of papers being turned. A steady, low key snore came out the holding cell, counterpoint duet to the dog snore. The drunk had turned himself in and even Desk Sergeant Watts hadn’t the heart to send him outside again.
Karen pulled another file from the large stack at the window but didn’t open it. Instead she counted umbrellas making their way down the street. She sketched a frowny face on the fogged-up window pane. Was the rain lessening? She looked at her watch, only seven minutes since she had last looked. Whether she had cabin fever or whatever, she needed to get out, perhaps another trip to the coffee shop on the corner for Mocha Latte. She brightened. “Anyone want another coffee?”
Detective Marty Russo’s staccato of hunting and pecking at the keyboard was suspended. “Yeah, I’ll have a Latte.” He pulled a bill from his pocket, folded it into an airplane and sent it over. It landed right in front of her. She was impressed; he must have had practice.
Detective Tom Selway, on the phone, just shook his head.
Jim didn’t hear her. Earpiece in, typing faster than she found comfortable to watch, he seemed oblivious to the outside world. Karen tapped him on the shoulder. “Coffee?” she asked loud enough to cut through the electronic voice reading the words back to him. He turned and smiled at her without missing a stroke on the keyboard, and then, after a moment, shook his head.
Lieutenant Fisk called out from his office. “Dunbar, you up for the next one?”
“Ah, yep.” Jim stopped typing immediately, pulled out his earpiece and headed for the Lieutenant’s office, stepping neatly around Karen as she pulled on her coat.
The boss came out of his office, glasses half way down his nose, scribbling a note. Karen stopped Jim with a hand on his shoulder. “How come you hear him and not me?” she asked, half-curious, half-annoyed.
Was she starting that one again? Shrugging off her question, Jim took another step toward the Lieutenant’s office, but the pressure on his shoulder returned. She wanted to discuss this now? He threw her a questioning frown. “What - ?”
She interrupted him, “He’s coming here.” The whisper emerged from under her breath, somewhere around his shoulder.
“Thanks.” Jim sent a rueful smile in her direction before he turned back and faced the Lieutenant. “What have we got?”
“DOA fished out of the river near Williamsburg Bridge, ID says he’s Craig Newland,” the Lieutenant read off a fluorescent sticky note. He held out the note toward Jim but Karen reached around and grabbed it. “Better give that to me, Boss.” She stepped up next to her partner.
Fisk looked from Jim to Karen; both detectives had the same half smile on their faces.
“Ah… right.” He headed straight back to his office.
“Jim, you want us to run the name while you and Karen go check the scene?” Marty grinned widely but kept his voice straight.
Tom’s head jerked up. “What are you doing?” he asked silently gesturing toward the windows.
Marty pointed at his partner and then to the deluge outside. “You wanna go?” he mouthed.
Tom threw an apologetic look Karen’s way and shook his head.
“Sure, thanks.” Jim slapped his thigh and Hank jumped up, stretching and yawning. Jim smiled as Hank’s tail beat happily on his leg. “Good boy, you ready to go hunt a perp?” Hank looked up at Karen, as eager to get out of the squad as she had been a few minutes ago. Jim reached for the harness and turned to Karen. “Let’s get rolling.”
Karen couldn’t keep the dismay from her face. The river? That was nothing like a warm and dry coffee shop. God she hated getting wet. She looked out the window. Was the rain easing? No. If anything it seemed to be getting worse. Karen’s eyes flicked between the window and her partner and his dog as they headed toward the elevator. Was Jim aware of the deluge outside? Did he have any idea what he had just put them up for? Her shoulders slumped. It probably didn’t matter; he wouldn’t let a little thing like a 40 day flood get between him and a case.
At the gate, Hank and Jim turned together. “Coming?”
Had that been a smile on Jim’s face? Sometimes he hid them behind his glasses and she couldn’t tell. She glared at him as he turned away, realized her scowl could never hit the mark and transferred it to Marty, smacking his money on his desk on her way out. “Smart ass – don’t look so smug.”
“Hey, it’s Dunbar’s case!” Marty couldn’t keep the laugh out of his voice. He raised his arms and tried an innocent expression, but it dissolved into an unequivocal grin.
Jim was still smiling as Hank stopped at the elevator. Reviewing cold cases could be very effective; it could also be as dreary as dog shit. He’d rather be out, no matter the weather.
Riverside
Jim squatted by the body. His latex gloved hand moved from the neck to the shoulder and then followed the man’s extended arm, up over the head and into the river. When he reached the wrist, Jim pulled the hand from the water and touched the spaces where the middle and ring fingers should have been. “You can’t tell if they’ve been eaten or cut?”
Karen shook her head. “No.” Her voice was swept away by the wind.
Jim turned his head to try and catch her answer. The umbrella hadn’t moved; she was still there. Had she answered or left him hanging? Was she still considering? Not knowing her expression, or if her attention was elsewhere, Jim waited. The rain slapped the river loudly and he found it hard to filter out the constant drone under the umbrella. “Karen?”
Seeing the frown and confusion as they chased each other across his face, Karen raised her voice above the rain, “Sorry, Jim, no.”
“Okay, I’ve got a pretty good picture of what we got.” Jim placed the hand on the man’s chest, safe for now from the hungry river. Jim stood, while behind his back, the arm slid smoothly back over the still cold chest, past the head and slipped silently into the water again. “No disturbance on the grass, no blood or debris, just a washed up body?” Jim queried.
“Yep, not the crime scene, just a landing place,” Karen agreed.
“I guess he’s lucky. With the river so swollen, he could have sunk or floated straight out to the Atlantic.”
“Lucky?” Karen’s tone was dry.
Jim grinned. He’d said she had a fair sense of humor; his opinion had changed over the last months; hers was a fairly wicked sense of humor.
“You done here? ‘Cause I’d really like to get out of this rain. Even the squad seems cheerful and cozy compared to this.” She looked at the dead man on the riverbank. Her thoughts were dark and somber. He was someone’s son, someone’s lover, someone’s friend, a once-good looking man, who made a cold and repellant corpse.
“ME here yet?” Jim shouted to be heard above the rain.
Karen was grateful to be interrupted in her thinking. “No, let’s get back to the road, though. I’ve seen enough.” She took a last look at the body: head downhill, arms outstretched as if to dive into the river again.
The man who had found the body, had dragged him bare feet first, up the bank twelve inches or so, but the rising river was working to reclaim its prize. Male, 5’10’’, jeans and a long sleeved t-shirt with patches of what looked like a pale grey, now brown with river mud, face up, blonde hair, dark roots, and blue eyes open and staring blankly, Karen shuddered at the description as she fixed it in her head. She watched while Jim stripped his latex gloves and poked them into a pocket. “Here.” She brushed her arm past Jim’s hand and was glad for the warmth that began to flow from his grip. Despite the freezing air, he seemed impervious to the cold. Together they moved back up the slope away from the river.
At the roadside above, the ME van arrived. Three people jumped out to survey the scene, Deputy ME Jennifer Shelby and Assistant ME’s Des and Jessie. It was a long drop to the river itself. Apart from a few steps near the top, the bank looked steep and treacherous. Whole sections of bank were being dislodged and washed away. The waves lapped at the body, tasting it and eager to swallow it whole.