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Post by Duchess of Lashes on Sept 6, 2005 18:59:24 GMT -5
Okay, I guess I had a little more spare time than I thought this weekend - Part Thirteen is now finished and posted at the following link: www.fanfiction.net/s/2510488/13/As always, feedback, good, bad, indifferent or otherwise is sincerely appreciated. LongLashes |
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Post by shmeep on Sept 7, 2005 8:20:44 GMT -5
Thank you for another great chapter! What a treat. I already left a review for you over at fanfiction.net, but I want everyone else here to know that this is a good story and it really delves deeply into Jim's backstory, providing us with a lot of insight into what might have made him the person we came to know. I especially like the way Jim's friendship with Walter is played out here and it's fun to get to see Jim and Christie fall in love.
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Post by kenina on Sept 7, 2005 11:42:07 GMT -5
I have been meaning to review this since that first lovely chapter. You are doing us a wonderful service in giving us Jim and Christie's backstory, so thank you for that. I couldn't have imagined a more lovely history for them. I am hoping you will give us a glimpse of the marriage and maybe even continue into their descent into difficulties and infidelity. Theirs is such a wonderfully complex relationship, there are endless opportunities for what you can do with it, as talented as you obviously are.
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Post by hoosier on Sept 9, 2005 17:52:42 GMT -5
I have really enjoyed seeing Jim and Christie's romance develop. Please give us more,especially since it seems he is about to "pop the question"!  |
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