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Post by greenbeing on Nov 9, 2005 20:00:52 GMT -5
Here's a short story about Terry and Jimmy. Posted here and at ff.net.
Hope you all enjoy.
--GB
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Post by rducasey on Nov 9, 2005 20:42:06 GMT -5
Wow GB you are amazing. I printed it out but have only read the first three so far. I may have to save the rest for tomorrow. Too funny about the dentist appointment. I just love reading about the old Dunbar. Somehow we knew he was just like that, full of self-confidence and charisma- a real man's man, as they say.
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Post by bjobsessed on Nov 9, 2005 20:53:59 GMT -5
I also enjoyed the dentist. You stuck to Dunbar's character of being observant, thorough, and missing nothing. I don't find it too hard to believe that he would miss the chance to have some fun with Terry's awkwardness in the beginning either.
Great story.
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Post by Eyphur on Nov 9, 2005 21:57:34 GMT -5
Wow. Great story. Well written and original.
Fanfic Junkie's Current Mood: ;D
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Post by hoosier on Nov 14, 2005 16:17:44 GMT -5
WOW! Jim and Terry's chance meeting in the park! This was great stuff. To bad you didn't include a chapter on the shooting itself from Terry's POV but you have certainly done a fantastic job!!!  |
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