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Post by Duchess of Lashes on Apr 18, 2006 21:51:35 GMT -5
I think Chapter Twenty-One might be a little more X-rated than PG-13, but it's now done and posted here and at FanFiction.net at the following link: www.fanfiction.net/s/2510488/21/I really do appreciate the feedback so feel free to leave it here or there! |
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Post by rducasey on Apr 18, 2006 22:14:04 GMT -5
Thanks Lori for another great chapter. I left feedback over there, but in a nutshell (WOW).
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Post by mlm828 on Apr 18, 2006 22:43:55 GMT -5
Thank you so much for continuing the story. I especially like the way Christie stands up for Jim and speaks her mind to her dad.
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Post by carl1951 on Apr 19, 2006 19:51:07 GMT -5
As usual, GREAT
Later, Carl
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Post by hoosier on Apr 20, 2006 16:50:22 GMT -5
I will have to add another WOW to your list while I fan my blushing face! I have a sneaking suspicion that I know where the opening sequence originated  I am happy that Christie did stand up to her father, telling him something he really didn't want to hear and reiterating that she was happy. Great! |
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Post by Duchess of Lashes on Apr 22, 2006 22:14:54 GMT -5
I will have to add another WOW to your list while I fan my blushing face! I have a sneaking suspicion that I know where the opening sequence originated I am happy that Christie did stand up to her father, telling him something he really didn't want to hear and reiterating that she was happy. Great! Thank you for the feedback!! Blush! Blush!  Yes, I will admit it - I kind of borrowed a little bit from the opening sequence of Marlon's Brando - just a change of location, a brocade comforter, the middle of the night and this time, they managed to get through it Damn cell phones! |
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I am happy that Christie did stand up to her father, telling him something he really didn't want to hear and reiterating that she was happy. Great!
Yes, I will admit it - I kind of borrowed a little bit from the opening sequence of Marlon's Brando - just a change of location, a brocade comforter, the middle of the night and this time, they managed to get through it Damn cell phones!