Episode 22: "Kidnapped"

[mlm828]

I've posted a new "episode" here and at fanfiction.net: www.fanfiction.net/s/3013285/1/

Jim and Christie go out on a date, but nothing is ever easy for Mr. and Mrs. Dunbar. That's what makes it so much fun to write about them!

[anna]

I really like the way you've handled Christie in this story. Excellent!

[Eyphur]

I love. The Jim/Christie relationship seems very true to the show. More, more, more, please!

[bjobsessed]

So glad you didn't wait to post part two. I love the way Marty stood up for Jim. And I like the Jim/Christie relationship too

[Dreamfire]

Thanks MLM,

I really enjoyd the story. I liked the way Mary got so defensive about Jim! It was great to get an insight into how Christie sees things too.

I wonder why these two got together in the first place?

cheers!
P.S. I am stunned you missed the chance to have Jim land a few punches so we could drool even more! So I just imagined the perps walking in back and blue...

[maggiethecat]

Woof! You are sooooooooo good at this, mlm. The characters ring true, the police procedural elements are on the money, and the dialogue in the interrogation room crackled!

Don't for a minute think of stopping.

[Duchess of Lashes]

I think this one has to be my favorite yet, MLM - it really would have made a hell of an episode - and I can run it in my head it's that visual! Great job with the underlying tension on every level of this one.

[hoosier]

I agree with everything everyone has said but there has got to be more, yes? You can't leave us hanging! Until next week...

[shmeep]

Can you believe I finally just caught this one today? Sorry I got behind, but I'm glad I had such an entertaining and suspenseful story to read as I ate my lunch. Nicely done! And I really like the way you made Christie shut herself off to him at the very end. Chilling, but realistic. Thanks for yet another good read.