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Post by Dreamfire on Jul 4, 2006 0:41:33 GMT -5
I have just posted Smoke and Mirrors. I hope you all enjoy it.
I don't know protocol for beta's here. I am not sure if Beta's like to be known or not. So I wont mention a name until I getOK. But I want to say thanks to myb eta for putting up with my learning curve! And for so much help. I am greatful for every comment, every spelling error you found, every coma and bleep. Your tireless work is so appreciated by me.
I know some of you are waiting for Lost and Found part two and it will come soon, ( what an ambiguous word that is!) but this one just made me write it and it will impact on L&F part two so I am glad it gotout before part 2 is posted!
I've been loving the fanfic thathas been comming out and hope you enjoy this one as well.
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Post by anna on Jul 4, 2006 7:32:36 GMT -5
"Jim knew exactly when he’d stopped looking at her, but he began to wonder, now, when she’d stopped looking at him."
I love that sentence. Great job.
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Post by bjobsessed on Jul 4, 2006 8:49:36 GMT -5
I have to agree with anna, That is a great line.
Love the scene with Jim on the phone pretending to be another cop. That was some great humour injected into a story that really has me hoping part two isn't far behind. Karen doesn't get rattled by too much and I can't wait to find out how all those bodies disappeared.
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Post by Eyphur on Jul 4, 2006 13:22:11 GMT -5
Great story. I loved the snarky side of Karen. Looking forward to more of your work.
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Post by Duchess of Lashes on Jul 4, 2006 22:22:13 GMT -5
Well, after today's drama, I was ready for a little light reading! But light this one wasn't - this sizzles! Excellent dialogue, terrific action, wonderful details, and a snipy Karen - what more could anyone want? Except perhaps Lost and Found?
I am so glad you prefaced this by saying that the next installment of Lost and Found is not that far away!
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Post by rducasey on Jul 4, 2006 22:44:39 GMT -5
Oh my god, Natasha, I loved it too. Printed it out for the car ride today and it was wonderful. Can't wait for more from you.
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Post by Dreamfire on Jul 5, 2006 5:26:22 GMT -5
"Jim knew exactly when he’d stopped looking at her, but he began to wonder, now, when she’d stopped looking at him." I love that sentence. Great job. Blush, thanks Anna. I'm glad you enjoyed. |
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Post by Dreamfire on Jul 5, 2006 5:27:27 GMT -5
I have to agree with anna, That is a great line. Love the scene with Jim on the phone pretending to be another cop. That was some great humour injected into a story that really has me hoping part two isn't far behind. Karen doesn't get rattled by too much and I can't wait to find out how all those bodies disappeared. Thanks BJO. That little scene came in the final edit, good to know what you want so I can make sure you get it. |
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Post by Dreamfire on Jul 5, 2006 5:30:04 GMT -5
Well, after today's drama, I was ready for a little light reading! But light this one wasn't - this sizzles! Excellent dialogue, terrific action, wonderful details, and a snipy Karen - what more could anyone want? Except perhaps Lost and Found? I am so glad you prefaced this by saying that the next installment of Lost and Found is not that far away! Thanks LL, comming form you, queen of video's, this is high praise. Lightand Easy isn't easy for me, but wow sizzle! That comment makes it wonderful log on and read the review. Lost is not lost, it was just waylaid! it's back on the rails and on it's way. Thanks for the encouragement and thespecifics in your comments. It's like chocolate to a chockoaholic. |
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Post by Dreamfire on Jul 5, 2006 5:31:09 GMT -5
Oh my god, Natasha, I loved it too. Printed it out for the car ride today and it was wonderful. Can't wait for more from you. I'm in Print!! Wow! I better getback to work and get you some more. cheers N |
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Post by hoosier on Jul 6, 2006 17:07:28 GMT -5
I was so excited to find 2 new fanfics when I finally got back on. What a great job you have done with this one! I loved every bit of it. Two of my fav parts were when Jim had to save Karen at the dock,proving, yet again, that he is so competent its scary and when he got fed up to here in the hospital and just walked out!
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Post by Dreamfire on Jul 10, 2006 2:20:59 GMT -5
I was so excited to find 2 new fanfics when I finally got back on. What a great job you have done with this one! I loved every bit of it. Two of my fav parts were when Jim had to save Karen at the dock,proving, yet again, that he is so competent its scary and when he got fed up to here in the hospital and just walked out! Thanks Hoosier. It's really cool when I hear specific things that readers like, so thanks! |
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Post by carl1951 on Jul 10, 2006 13:36:25 GMT -5
Natasha (Our lady from the future) :
Another talented person on this board. (Is there anyplace else that has so much talent packed into such a small space?)
A fanfic is a great thing.
I'm sending you Karma.
Again, Thanks
Later, Carl
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