Off-Kilter

[bjobsessed]

This is very interesting! I don't know how you think of all this, but it's great. The crimes that aren't really crimes. Amazing.

Jim's thoughts as to how he would feel if something happened to Hank. Very realistic. Even though, for the most part, nothing happened, it would be very unsettling to know that someone had been in your house or apartment. Every time you left, you would wonder if they were coming back, what kind of game they were playing, and what they were going to do next. At least if they steal something, you know why they were there and that they're probably not coming back. This would be very hard psychologically.

Love the humour too between Karen and Jim. I can't figure out where this one is going and I can't wait to find out. Please don't make us wait too long.

[rducasey]

Wow GB, this was a great case. Just so intricate and really showed how well Jim and Karen bounced ideas around. How do you ever come up with these ideas? I especially like how you describe Jim's sence of hearing in the absense of sight.

[bjobsessed]

Great as always, GB! True to the show too. I could easily see Jim and Karen solving a case like this. I don't know how you come up with the ideas and then find a way to make it all fit together so well.

[anna]

GB, your mind is a strange and wonderful place!

[Dreamfire]

Gruesome, but not too gruesome, spooky but not too spooky, creeepy like 'ya want it and well, just fabulous!

ANd I LOVE the ending where Fisk is so dry and congratulates them on 17 cases solved! Very true to character.

I also really liked how you stepped out to a couple of years away and gave us the comfortable relationship between Marty and Jim. Felt very real to me.

Ashatan

[Eyphur]

Great Story!!! I loved the funny one liners in there!

[hoosier]

Another fabulous story! As others have said, creepy and spooky and wonderful. Thanks for doing your part in keeping the characters alive for all of us!