|
|
Post by rducasey on Oct 7, 2007 17:29:09 GMT -5
Like Kathy, I was once a Serial Killer and now, much to my own surprise, I too have written a vignette. Hope you enjoy it.... - Chris  Karma to you too, Chris for taking the plunge and a good job indeed. Nice of Christie to be so understanding. |
|
|
|
Post by Dreamfire on Oct 7, 2007 18:07:40 GMT -5
Yay Chris! How nice to wake to a spot of Jimmy. And a warm fuzzy one at that. Thank you for writing and posting.
I am so enjoying these and hope we get a regular supply.
N
|
|
|
|
Post by Katryna on Oct 7, 2007 18:09:23 GMT -5
Like Kathy, I was once a Serial Killer and now, much to my own surprise, I too have written a vignette. Hope you enjoy it.... - Chris Glad to see another serial killer reappear. I think there are a couple more out there who should join us!! |
|
|
|
Post by mlm828 on Oct 7, 2007 21:26:08 GMT -5
More vignettes -- what fun! ;D I knew there were more writers among us. Thanks, Katryna and Chris -- and keep 'em coming!
|
|
|
|
Post by matilda on Oct 7, 2007 22:09:03 GMT -5
I love your Vignette Chris. Sadly, it captures some aspects of marriage so well!
What is truly amazing is that you capture nuance so very well, in ENGLISH, not even your first language. You talented thing you!
Matilda
|
|
|
|
Post by bjobsessed on Oct 7, 2007 22:44:04 GMT -5
Very well done, Chris! |
|
|
|
Post by Chris on Oct 8, 2007 16:12:50 GMT -5
Thank you for your kind comments and the karma. Nice of Christie to be so understanding. For now... There's no knowing what she'll be like in the morning... ;D What is truly amazing is that you capture nuance so very well, in ENGLISH, not even your first language. You talented thing you! Matilda Thank you. I have learned from the Masters. I think I've read every BJ fanfiction out there.  That and this past year on the Board has done wonders to my English. Not only do I have great friends here, I'm also improving my English as well as doing things I never thought I would - like writing a BJ fanfic, although a VERY short one, what more can I ask for??? Take care and keep smiling - Chris |
|
|
|
Post by Chris on Oct 8, 2007 16:17:06 GMT -5
Way to go Mary!!!! One more talented writer amongst us, karma! And the Serial Killers strike again!!!!! Take care and keep smiling - Chris |
|
|
|
Post by Katryna on Oct 8, 2007 17:32:41 GMT -5
Karma, Mary!!! I knew you could do it. I loved it. It brought tears to my eyes! Now, I know there is at least one more serial killer out there who is also a brilliant writer! Will we hear from her?
|
|
|
|
Post by bjobsessed on Oct 8, 2007 17:32:49 GMT -5
That was great, Mary. Simple but powerful and a wonderful illustration of Jim trying to reach out to Christie. Loved it.
|
|
|
|
Post by Duchess of Lashes on Oct 8, 2007 18:03:16 GMT -5
Ah, yes, that's the way to jump in and get your feet wet! But you didn't do that - you took the complete plunge and wow, did you make it work! Like Kathryna and Chris before you, another great job! Very touching and a nice marriage of what we knew from the Galloway sessions to that particular scene. Well done!
|
|
|
|
Post by Duchess of Lashes on Oct 8, 2007 18:04:38 GMT -5
And now to Chris - welcome to the Vignette club! I really enjoyed the read - it was short, sweet and visually complete!! Another great job!
|
|
|
|
Post by hoosier on Oct 8, 2007 18:12:07 GMT -5
Two stories! How did I get so lucky!
Chris, that was sooo funny. Jim will have to remember and go easy on the wheatgrass juice the next time out!
Rducasey, you captured it perfectly. You know Jim would have rehashed every session with Galloway on his ride home and its nice to see that he did take them to heart. The screencap was a nice touch.
|
|
Deleted
Deleted Member
Posts: 0
|
Post by Deleted on Oct 8, 2007 19:25:36 GMT -5
Great job, Mary, particularly that you outlined "Jim's" commute dead-on! You'd been on the train with me, over the Manhattan Bridge and you nailed it!!!!!! It's awesome that you not only wrote this great story, but that you took your NY experience and used it! Brava!!!!!
|
|
|
|
Post by carl1951 on Oct 8, 2007 20:05:40 GMT -5
Karma congrats to you Mary.
Thanks to you.
Later, Carl
|
|
