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Post by Chris on Dec 17, 2007 16:41:01 GMT -5
I know I've kept you waiting but your waiting is over, the next chapter is here. You can also find it on fanfiction.net. Take care and keep smiling - Chris  |
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Post by Dreamfire on Dec 17, 2007 17:38:26 GMT -5
Chris,
I had totally missed this somehow and just read your story. I am so glad you have plunged into the deep end for a full story. Great images and realistic action, I like it a lot. I like the way you have brought in bits like Jim and Marty together, Semple being... well, Semple and I like the case too. Looking forward to more.
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Natascha
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Post by bjobsessed on Dec 17, 2007 21:31:05 GMT -5
This is great, Chris. I love the way you are tying in characters from the show. It's so like Semple to brush something like this off. Just like N, looking forward to the the next chapter.
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Post by Duchess of Lashes on Dec 17, 2007 22:34:14 GMT -5
Keep it coming Chris - you definitely have me wondering how all of this is going to pan out - the plot is really great! And why, oh why, does Marty always have to be so...Marty, although I do love Jim's quick little retort!
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Post by hoosier on Dec 18, 2007 18:45:35 GMT -5
Semple, what can you say? Tactful as ever! How can anyone be so...oblivious? Sheesh!
Like LL, I liked how Jim turned the tables on Marty and made him question how he would like being in a similar situation. Certainly made him squirm just a little.
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Post by adl30uk on Dec 19, 2007 16:13:22 GMT -5
Just got a chance to read the latest installment and i really like the humour, especially the pact they make that if either of them end up like glen they want to be shot looking forward to the next chapter |
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Post by Chris on Jan 6, 2008 15:44:27 GMT -5
The next chapter is now posted, hope you'll enjoy reading it. Take care and keep smiling - Chris |
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Post by bjobsessed on Jan 6, 2008 17:40:38 GMT -5
You sure have me wondering! This is great.
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Post by Duchess of Lashes on Jan 6, 2008 17:44:31 GMT -5
I'm with you, BJO...so many little strings to be knotted! The addition of the "boy" is very interesting and leaves me wondering how he is going to fit in to all of this. Well done.
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Post by rducasey on Jan 6, 2008 18:26:39 GMT -5
Enjoying this very much Chris. Karma to you.
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