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Post by Dreamfire on Feb 9, 2008 0:06:30 GMT -5
I enjoyed playing with the dream sequence so here's another try.
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Post by mlm828 on Feb 9, 2008 13:28:15 GMT -5
I really liked this one. It felt as if I was in a dream while reading it. Good job!
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Post by bjobsessed on Feb 9, 2008 13:32:20 GMT -5
I liked it too. I thought it was a flashback at first--and maybe it is, but I thought it was a normal one, not in a dream.
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Post by hoosier on Feb 9, 2008 17:03:48 GMT -5
I thought it was a flashback too at first. Maybe it was part dream, part flashback. Things do have a tendency to get muddled--is it real or fantasy? Did that really happen or do you only wish it did? Anyway, Ash you are on a roll!
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Post by Katryna on Feb 9, 2008 18:37:47 GMT -5
Add me to the growing list of satisfied readers!!!  |
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Post by Chris on Feb 9, 2008 21:29:37 GMT -5
Natascha, you are so on a roll here!!! Karma!! - Chris  |
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Post by matilda on Feb 10, 2008 5:57:43 GMT -5
Natascha, you are so on a roll here!!! Karma!! - Chris She's like that. Tks N. M |
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Post by Colorado girl on Feb 10, 2008 16:08:05 GMT -5
I really enjoyed this one Natascha.....thank you !!
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