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Post by rducasey on Feb 14, 2008 6:21:32 GMT -5
Ah very interesting N. I am looking forward to the next chapter. I like the way you interpret the facial expressions and body language of the team. How appropriate that we are having that same weather here right now. It makes it easy to identify with Karen's reluctance to go out in it.
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Post by Chris on Feb 14, 2008 18:42:07 GMT -5
Yaye, one more fanfic!!!! Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next - karma from a huge fanfic fan!!! - Chris  |
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Post by hoosier on Feb 15, 2008 18:35:46 GMT -5
You can't leave us hanging like this  Add another one to a string of great fics, Ash! |
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Post by Colorado girl on Feb 15, 2008 22:46:34 GMT -5
great start! Looking for more!
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Post by rducasey on Feb 22, 2008 15:01:52 GMT -5
A snowy day, no school, no reason to go out, and a new chapter from N....what could be better. And this time leaving us with a real "cliffhanger" literally. Thanks N. (not me...just a picture from our local newspaper for today)  |
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Post by Chris on Feb 22, 2008 16:06:50 GMT -5
Looks cold out there, Mary, brrr... Ash, you are the master of cliffhangers, keep up the good work (just don't keep us hanging too long, please, karma?) - Chris |
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Post by hoosier on Feb 23, 2008 17:54:44 GMT -5
I have a sneaking suspicion that Des is the reason for Karen's sudden slide towards the river. Show-off  Don't keep us too long in suspense! |
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Post by Chris on Feb 26, 2008 18:45:23 GMT -5
Whau!!! Great chapter. I love the awestruck ME and poor Jessie, in love and having to compete with the famous Detective Dunbar!! ;D - Chris |
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Post by hoosier on Feb 26, 2008 19:33:33 GMT -5
Whoa, whew--quite the breathtaking chapter! I'm glad Des got his comeuppance--showoff! It was great to see that Jesse was the one who was so professional and in charge. And Jim, rushing in to the rescue, not once thinking about what might happen to both of them, only knowing he had to have his partner's back!  |
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Post by Chris on Mar 10, 2008 17:52:39 GMT -5
I like this - being warm, dry and comfy reading about the pouring rain!!! ;D I would love to have some of those chocolate chip cookies they were talking about though  Take care and keep smiling - Chris |
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Post by hoosier on Mar 10, 2008 18:51:30 GMT -5
With all the weather we have had, I totally sympathize with Karen. Yuck! Better change before the stuff hardens any more!
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Post by Chris on Mar 21, 2008 19:21:15 GMT -5
Natascha, I like that you have Karen forcing Jim to open up a little - he needs to learn that it won't kill him if he does.  Karma! - Chris |
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Post by hoosier on Mar 22, 2008 16:02:07 GMT -5
Jim, a forensic scientist? Handling cases and evidence? I can hear Marty now! ;D
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Add another one to a string of great fics, Ash!
Don't keep us too long in suspense!
