Post by Colorado girl on Feb 27, 2007 0:17:08 GMT -5
This story is about what might have happened during the day in the episode Doggone. I hope you enjoy it.
Lost in Hoboken by Momoonwez
Chapter one
“This sucks!” Shouted Jim Dunbar at the top of his lungs.
Being left in the middle of nowhere was not how this day was supposed to turn out. Jim Dunbar had come to the end of his patience. First the undercover drug deal had gone south. Then the perps sucker punched him and took off with Hank in the car. He tried to make a run to rescue Hank but instead fell over a huge piece of debris in the road. Finally, to add insult to injury was the fact that all three of his squad mates were nowhere to be found.
“What the hell happened?,” he asked when he finally was able to reach them on his cell phone. They explained that they got boxed in. The excuse did not relieve the stress and frustration that Jim was experiencing.
“I don’t know where I am!.” The words kept reverberating in his mind after he had said it.
Karen tried to assure him that they were working on finding him.” We’ll triangulate your signal and get back to you.”
”What’s the matter with these guys,” Jim thought. “Six perfectly good eyes AND not one of them could follow his trail.
How many times did he have to prove himself over and over the last few months to demonstrate that he could do the job? He had ten years of experience being one of New York’s finest under his belt. He was the senior member of the squad when the bank robbery happened. Now every day was a swim upstream. There were constant reminders that there were those who constantly doubted his ability to do his work.
Marty was the worst of all. : From the very instant that he met Jim there was a battle of wills. Marty loved being the alpha dog in the eighth precinct. There was no way in hell he was going give up his place, especially to a blind super hero with “balls of steel.”
“Yep, blind as a bat.!” The words still stung as Jim recalled the day Marty felt the need to spew the words to Don Yun.
Jim could take the insults. It came with the job. It went deeper than that. What was irritating was this inferior detective questioning how he did his job.
“Why do you need to solve every little thing?”
From Jim’s perspective, that was a stupid question. Solving cases the way he did was what excited Jim the most about the job. He was able to see the case from many different angles. Outsmarting the bad guys and getting them off the streets brought him great satisfaction. Why would he change a technique that he had found so successful for the last ten years? It was part of who he was. It was the reason that he wanted to be back on the job.
Jim shouted out” Is anybody there?’ He stretched out his hands to come in contact with something that would give him some bearing. He continued to think as he walked.
Tom had only questioned Jim once about his ability to do his job. He never insulted him or anybody for that matter. What disturbed Jim about Tom was his silence. He never took a stand one way or the other. In the past, Jim stepped in many times to protect or defend fellow cops when the need arose. Tom’s silence made Jim feel insecure about where they stood with each other.
Jim yelled for help again. This space was huge. He walked for a long time not sure where he was headed. Several times he tumbled when his foot hit a rut in the path. The frustration was overwhelming. Shouting out was the only way to alleviate some of his angst.
Jim’s thoughts went back to the squad. He recalled his dealings with Fisk. The ridiculous squabbles with Marty had slightly tainted his reputation. Now, however, that was mostly in the past, He recalled how Fisk had asked him to consider the others by staying in the house rather than go out in the field. After months of clearing cases, he felt on steadier ground with his boss, until today. Fisk had initially questioned the undercover operation by saying, “I ‘m not sure you should even be doing this.”
Jim responded with,”It’s not like I’m doing this alone. I’ve got all you guys.” He was grateful that Fisk gave him a chance. Now Jim doubted whether he would ever get another opportunity to prove himself. He now wondered if today was a huge mistake that Fisk could have prevented.
The only one that gave him a fighting chance was Karen. She was cold at the beginning. Finding out that Anne Donnelly was her friend did not help. But by the end of the case, he had come closer to winning her over. She had been generous in her understanding of his disability. Offering her arm was a huge gesture of generosity. Though they had plowed through some rocky roads in the last few months, Jim enjoyed their partnership.
Jim found a fence. He followed its path. Every minute felt like hours.
Jim had forgotten about Christie. He now recalled that he had also gotten his chops busted by her today. He still hadn’t figured out why she was still so angry with him. He wondered if Christie had been contacted. He wondered how worried she might be.
Jim screamed out in angst. “Welcome to my f**king world.” He thought,” I can only go up from here.”
Jim sat for a while with his back to the fence to map out a plan. If the squad could not locate him, he would have to figure out something on his own. Maybe he could search for a stick or a pole that could be used like a cane.
That thought made him think of Hank. Jim fumed at the idea of those skells taking Hank.
He tried to stuff down the anxiety of what Hank must be experiencing right now .He tried to take a different direction in thinking about Hank. Maybe a little humor could help right now.
“Hell, if Hank were here, this might have even been fun.” Jim chuckled. Talk about man’s best friend. Hank made so much of life not only bearable but enjoyable on so many levels. Jim needed to get out of this situation positively for Hank and himself.
After resting a few minutes and calming down, He decided that his best bet was to continue on the path of the fence. Maybe the fence would lead him to a street or building where he could get some help.
As Jim continued, he approached a metal sign hanging on the fence. He could feel some raised printing on the sign. It read the name of a company. Taking his phone, he called the squad hoping the signal would be strong enough to get through. Luckily it worked and Jim was soon on his way back to the squad.
Lost in Hoboken by Momoonwez
Chapter one
“This sucks!” Shouted Jim Dunbar at the top of his lungs.
Being left in the middle of nowhere was not how this day was supposed to turn out. Jim Dunbar had come to the end of his patience. First the undercover drug deal had gone south. Then the perps sucker punched him and took off with Hank in the car. He tried to make a run to rescue Hank but instead fell over a huge piece of debris in the road. Finally, to add insult to injury was the fact that all three of his squad mates were nowhere to be found.
“What the hell happened?,” he asked when he finally was able to reach them on his cell phone. They explained that they got boxed in. The excuse did not relieve the stress and frustration that Jim was experiencing.
“I don’t know where I am!.” The words kept reverberating in his mind after he had said it.
Karen tried to assure him that they were working on finding him.” We’ll triangulate your signal and get back to you.”
”What’s the matter with these guys,” Jim thought. “Six perfectly good eyes AND not one of them could follow his trail.
How many times did he have to prove himself over and over the last few months to demonstrate that he could do the job? He had ten years of experience being one of New York’s finest under his belt. He was the senior member of the squad when the bank robbery happened. Now every day was a swim upstream. There were constant reminders that there were those who constantly doubted his ability to do his work.
Marty was the worst of all. : From the very instant that he met Jim there was a battle of wills. Marty loved being the alpha dog in the eighth precinct. There was no way in hell he was going give up his place, especially to a blind super hero with “balls of steel.”
“Yep, blind as a bat.!” The words still stung as Jim recalled the day Marty felt the need to spew the words to Don Yun.
Jim could take the insults. It came with the job. It went deeper than that. What was irritating was this inferior detective questioning how he did his job.
“Why do you need to solve every little thing?”
From Jim’s perspective, that was a stupid question. Solving cases the way he did was what excited Jim the most about the job. He was able to see the case from many different angles. Outsmarting the bad guys and getting them off the streets brought him great satisfaction. Why would he change a technique that he had found so successful for the last ten years? It was part of who he was. It was the reason that he wanted to be back on the job.
Jim shouted out” Is anybody there?’ He stretched out his hands to come in contact with something that would give him some bearing. He continued to think as he walked.
Tom had only questioned Jim once about his ability to do his job. He never insulted him or anybody for that matter. What disturbed Jim about Tom was his silence. He never took a stand one way or the other. In the past, Jim stepped in many times to protect or defend fellow cops when the need arose. Tom’s silence made Jim feel insecure about where they stood with each other.
Jim yelled for help again. This space was huge. He walked for a long time not sure where he was headed. Several times he tumbled when his foot hit a rut in the path. The frustration was overwhelming. Shouting out was the only way to alleviate some of his angst.
Jim’s thoughts went back to the squad. He recalled his dealings with Fisk. The ridiculous squabbles with Marty had slightly tainted his reputation. Now, however, that was mostly in the past, He recalled how Fisk had asked him to consider the others by staying in the house rather than go out in the field. After months of clearing cases, he felt on steadier ground with his boss, until today. Fisk had initially questioned the undercover operation by saying, “I ‘m not sure you should even be doing this.”
Jim responded with,”It’s not like I’m doing this alone. I’ve got all you guys.” He was grateful that Fisk gave him a chance. Now Jim doubted whether he would ever get another opportunity to prove himself. He now wondered if today was a huge mistake that Fisk could have prevented.
The only one that gave him a fighting chance was Karen. She was cold at the beginning. Finding out that Anne Donnelly was her friend did not help. But by the end of the case, he had come closer to winning her over. She had been generous in her understanding of his disability. Offering her arm was a huge gesture of generosity. Though they had plowed through some rocky roads in the last few months, Jim enjoyed their partnership.
Jim found a fence. He followed its path. Every minute felt like hours.
Jim had forgotten about Christie. He now recalled that he had also gotten his chops busted by her today. He still hadn’t figured out why she was still so angry with him. He wondered if Christie had been contacted. He wondered how worried she might be.
Jim screamed out in angst. “Welcome to my f**king world.” He thought,” I can only go up from here.”
Jim sat for a while with his back to the fence to map out a plan. If the squad could not locate him, he would have to figure out something on his own. Maybe he could search for a stick or a pole that could be used like a cane.
That thought made him think of Hank. Jim fumed at the idea of those skells taking Hank.
He tried to stuff down the anxiety of what Hank must be experiencing right now .He tried to take a different direction in thinking about Hank. Maybe a little humor could help right now.
“Hell, if Hank were here, this might have even been fun.” Jim chuckled. Talk about man’s best friend. Hank made so much of life not only bearable but enjoyable on so many levels. Jim needed to get out of this situation positively for Hank and himself.
After resting a few minutes and calming down, He decided that his best bet was to continue on the path of the fence. Maybe the fence would lead him to a street or building where he could get some help.
As Jim continued, he approached a metal sign hanging on the fence. He could feel some raised printing on the sign. It read the name of a company. Taking his phone, he called the squad hoping the signal would be strong enough to get through. Luckily it worked and Jim was soon on his way back to the squad.