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Post by rducasey on Dec 21, 2005 16:41:06 GMT -5
Chapters 21 and 22 are up. And 23 and 24. --GB To hell with the Christmas shopping. Oh boy. Thank you GB and Merry Christmas to you too. |
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Post by doobrah on Dec 21, 2005 17:40:21 GMT -5
WOW--- and Merry Christmas to you, too, GB! Loved Hank's assessment that Jim needed to go to the vet!  |
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Post by greenbeing on Dec 21, 2005 19:45:53 GMT -5
Oops. And Chapter 25.
--GB
Merry Christmas to all, and to all, a good night.
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Post by Eyphur on Dec 21, 2005 20:49:11 GMT -5
Wow. I love it. The story just keeps getting better and more intriguing. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Post by mlm828 on Dec 21, 2005 21:42:25 GMT -5
Thanks for the early Christmas present, GB, and Merry Christmas!
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Post by bjobsessed on Dec 21, 2005 23:40:27 GMT -5
I don't know how you do it. It is getting so complicated, intriguing, exciting etc. etc. all at once. It's so good.
Merry Christmas GB! Thanks for such a great story.
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Post by carl1951 on Dec 22, 2005 21:54:52 GMT -5
Karma to you GB. Thanks for the wonderful story.
Merry Christmas
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Post by greenbeing on Dec 28, 2005 16:58:41 GMT -5
Chapters 26 and 27 are up. I triple-nano'd, so to whoever (I think it was rducasey?) said I should do a trilogy--I don't need to now!
Happy New Year to everyone.
--GB
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Post by bjobsessed on Dec 28, 2005 22:02:15 GMT -5
Wow! The case just keeps getting more interesting with all it's little twists and turns.
Loved the whole pumpkin scene too. Nice little break from the case for Jim. Great to see him and Christie enjoying each other like that.
Great Job!
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Post by bjobsessed on Jan 7, 2006 16:36:58 GMT -5
Great as usual. Loved the fact that Jim was worried about Karen and Marty took Jim to check on her without the lip.
Off to read Cuffing the Chicken!
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Post by bjobsessed on Jan 10, 2006 1:00:21 GMT -5
Really great chapter GB! Never expected Jim to sit back and let Marty and Tom interview Uncle Josiah. Must be a reason somewhere.  Loved the part at the end between Jim and Karen. Very touching. |
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Post by Eyphur on Jan 10, 2006 1:21:26 GMT -5
Great Chapter GB!
I have been rereading the earlier parts of the story and I love how it all fits together. The more I read the more impressed with your writing I become. So keep up the good work.
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Post by greenbeing on Jan 14, 2006 15:27:50 GMT -5
*Gasp!
7 notebooks, 4 pens, 3 discs and a flash drive, three and a half months, six stories, and almost 200,000 archived words later, I'm finally done with my first Blind Justice story.
"It's the... end! It's the veritable finish--" And I forget the rest of the words to that song, so I must stop singing.
--GB
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Post by bjobsessed on Jan 14, 2006 16:00:48 GMT -5
I know you were a little disappointed with how the story turned out, but I kind of liked the light hearted ending to a very intense, well-written story. Sometimes guys like MJ just don't get caught because they are so good at covering their tracks and getting others to do their dirty work. They somehow manage to work just above the law. So I don't think it was such an unrealistic ending.
I think you did a great job of showing the relief everyone felt and even how Jim and Marty have come to a good level of understanding each other--especially when Marty realized that it's important to tell Jim when he moves things.
Where did you get all those blind jokes? Did you make them up? Some were kind of funny. Nice to see Jim able to take it too without feeling uncomfortable.
I'm truly sorry it's over. Great job.
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Post by Eyphur on Jan 14, 2006 23:53:13 GMT -5
I've enjoyed reading Messiah Josiah so much! I can't believe it's been so long since you started writing, it seems like Chapter 1 was only a few weeks ago. I have been impressed throughout with your writing, especially the characterization, which I Think was right on, and also the volume of work. I'm sure that someday soon we will all be discussing reading you work in some national publication. I hope you will consider writing another story in the near future,
I remain,
Blind Justice Fanfic Junkie
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Loved the part at the end between Jim and Karen. Very touching.