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Post by anna on May 23, 2006 7:28:29 GMT -5
Woohoo! I can tell we are in for quite a ride. Great start.
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Post by Eyphur on May 23, 2006 11:31:45 GMT -5
*Does a Happy Dance* New Fanfic! My favorite thing to find when I log on. I love it allready. PLease update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens.
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Post by bjobsessed on May 23, 2006 13:43:49 GMT -5
Wow! What a nice surprise. I was hoping this would be here and since my time is limited right now, I'm so glad it was.
I hope you don't keep us waiting too long. This has me on the edge of my seat. Can't wait for more.
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Post by Duchess of Lashes on May 23, 2006 19:32:59 GMT -5
Such an excellent start to what promises to be a very riveting story and while I know you just posted part one, I am so hoping it won't take you too long to continue! Your writing style is very appealing and the flow throughout is so smooth!
Please keep it coming, Ashatan - it's terrific!
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Post by rducasey on May 23, 2006 21:57:49 GMT -5
I love it too, Natasha, can't wait for part 2. Talk about taking off with a bang. Wow. Love it.
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Post by hoosier on May 24, 2006 16:43:50 GMT -5
Add another WOW to your list! It grabs your attention and doesn't let go. I actually felt a tad bit breathless! Can hardly wait for the next installment!
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Post by Dreamfire on Jun 8, 2006 4:12:34 GMT -5
Thanks for reading everyone. I am back form holiday and working on the next bit.
I had to correct a small mistake on page one. Doesn't change the chapter at all. Just someone asked why Jim did not call Christie's phone. He did of course, I just fogot to mention it! Silly me.
cheers
Ashatan
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Post by Duchess of Lashes on Jul 17, 2006 11:51:31 GMT -5
So happy to wake up this morning and find the next chapters to this story. Again you have managed to create a tense mood throughout and the introduction to a particular character who hasn't managed to get any more civil just adds real OOMPH to the storyline. A terrific read and I hope you keep it coming - perhaps a little sooner?
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Post by bjobsessed on Jul 17, 2006 13:20:01 GMT -5
Really great, N. A lot of tension and a lot of thinking by the blond detective. Just as he did on the show, his mind works in mysterious ways and always gets the job done. Hope there's a part three soon!
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Post by mlm828 on Jul 18, 2006 1:22:57 GMT -5
I am really enjoying this story -- so suspenseful and involving. And I really like the way you portray Jim's strength and vulnerability. Good job!
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Post by hoosier on Jul 19, 2006 17:02:07 GMT -5
What a chapter! Having to search Jim and Christie's apartment, waiting, waiting, waiting, pacing, pacing, pacing and the return of uber-creep Leonard Mattis  even if he was just on the phone! Can hardly wait for the next installment. |
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Post by rducasey on Jul 19, 2006 17:27:24 GMT -5
What a chapter! Having to search Jim and Christie's apartment, waiting, waiting, waiting, pacing, pacing, pacing and the return of uber-creep Leonard Mattis even if he was just on the phone! Can hardly wait for the next installment. Oh gosh, me too. I was on the edge of my seat reading that. Just read it today Natasha, and found it so gripping. Excellent. and can't wait to see what is in store for us next chapter. Don't make us wait too long. |
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Post by anna on Aug 27, 2006 23:12:00 GMT -5
So . . . uh . . . how's Christie doing? You know . . . in the kidnapper's car?
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Post by Dreamfire on Aug 28, 2006 2:32:50 GMT -5
Hi Anna, several answers come to mind. 1. How would you be? 2. At least he kidnapped her in her own car  3. She's just beig polished so honestly you should see her really soon. Few days I hope. 4. it is so cool to have you asking !!!!!!!!! ;D |
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Post by bjobsessed on Sept 7, 2006 7:02:40 GMT -5
Yayy!! You posted part three. I've been looking forward to this for a while. Unfortunately, I can't read it until tonight! I have to go to work in ten minutes and I don't want to drive myself crazy by reading part of it. My mouse is about to die too because I didn't put it in the charger right last night. Sigh. Something to look forward to tonight whenever I get home.  |
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even if he was just on the phone! Can hardly wait for the next installment. 
