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Post by hoosier on Dec 19, 2006 18:25:02 GMT -5
Christie's main complaint has always been that Jim will not open up and talk to her. Well, it seems to be her main problem too! Wonder what set her off, it has to be more than Jim and the job. Future installments??? Poor Jimmy, he sure took a beating in this one. Glad Karen finally laid down the law and took him to the ER but too bad we didn't get to see more of Jennie. I really like her. Great job!  |
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Post by janna on Jan 27, 2007 8:30:09 GMT -5
First of all I have red the story with great excitement from begining to end. The theme is very interesting, not just the case but that "collaring" is not the end of the story. It is peculiar things can be misinterpreted by wrenching the words from their context. I mean in the court. I like that scene. It contains every little bit what can be wrong in that silly law. ..his cases dismissed, his evidence, so carefully gathered, burnt to a cinder under the torch of a cross examination. It is quiet strange for me that law with the jury. It is like a play, and the winer is the better actor.
And Jimmy is just like Jimmy. I could very well imagine all the actions. And Karen. And that dumb Cris, and that malice defence attorney. People's prejudice.
Another scene I like is the fight between Jim and Dimmey. Basicly I don't enjoy fight decriptions (especially that long ones) because maybe I can not properly imagine. But this I could! It was in front of me, and my stomach became a little nut. I felt empathy with Karen.
Finally I like the way ridding of Christie. I have always felt her a very cold and egoistic person.
I have felt sorry when I have finished. So I hope you will write a lot like this.
Janna
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