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Post by Dreamfire on Nov 30, 2006 20:13:55 GMT -5
Hi, I hope you enjoy my new fic.  If anyone would like regular installments on this, then review for me and I will make sure there are no delays for you. Love, Ashatan |
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Post by bjobsessed on Nov 30, 2006 20:46:03 GMT -5
Let me be the first to say, "Yayyy! More fanfic to read!" It's been too long. Loved the scene with the submarine woman. Nice humor between Karen and Jim. Based on past experience with you, something tells me this will be quite a ride. You got me as soon as you mentioned missing kids. Animals and kids hook me every time.
Don't make us wait too long. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Post by anna on Nov 30, 2006 20:52:44 GMT -5
Ah, Dunbar turning on the charm. What woman wouldn't melt? And of course we want more. As soon as possible!
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Post by rducasey on Nov 30, 2006 20:58:52 GMT -5
Excellent as usual Natasha. HHhmmm....what is going on with Christie? That should be interesting. I agree with Anita, too funny with the submarine lady. Keep those installments coming.
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Post by bjobsessed on Dec 1, 2006 20:52:36 GMT -5
That was a tension filled chapter! I can picture it every time Jim get hit or punched and it makes me cringe. Very vivid and visual.
Hope you're not going to leave Jim in there with that big looney too long. Please don't ok?
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Post by hoosier on Dec 2, 2006 16:50:59 GMT -5
Literally on the edge of my seat! What a jammed packed story! Please, don't make us wait too long..you know, the edge of your seat can get uncomfortable after a while! ;D
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Post by rducasey on Dec 2, 2006 20:26:02 GMT -5
Oh boy, you made my night N. I will go fix a cup of coffee and sit back and enjoy the next chapter.
Modified to add: Wow another exciting chapter. Looks like those martial arts lessons paid off. I loved the pride Karen felt for her partner.
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Post by Dreamfire on Dec 2, 2006 20:40:31 GMT -5
Thanks Mary, I got the warm fuzzies from your post. I hope it lives up to your expectations. I think I'm addicted to reviews. I get such a warm fuzzy, even when someone complains about edge of the seat disorder! ;D Sorry to have tortured you, Hoosier! I'll see if I can do a double chapter soon to make up for it. |
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Post by mlm828 on Dec 2, 2006 21:07:10 GMT -5
I am so enjoying this one. It can't be easy to write an extended fight scene from Jim's point of view, but you pulled it off. And Jim and the little girl -- awww.
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Post by Dreamfire on Dec 3, 2006 6:09:10 GMT -5
Thanks Martha,
Thanks Mary and Ann and Hoosier for your reviews, there's a couple more chapters up for you....
N
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Post by rducasey on Dec 3, 2006 11:04:43 GMT -5
Thanks Martha, Thanks Mary and Ann and Hoosier for your reviews, there's a couple more chapters up for you.... N Go to sleep with a new chapter and wake up to two more. You are amazing , N. I love this with the ME. If she has to work on live bodies, looks like she picked a good one. And she knows it too!. Shows Jim still hasn't lost that sense of humor. |
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Post by bjobsessed on Dec 3, 2006 17:31:04 GMT -5
It is amazing to me how you can go from so much tension in one chapter to so much humor in another. Lucky ME. I'm so glad Jim made it out as well as he did and I'm sure he proved, at least to Karen, that he can 'hold his own around here.'
Modified to add: I'm so glad Jim is sitting [/i]on the slab and not laying on it!
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Post by hoosier on Dec 4, 2006 18:37:06 GMT -5
Wow, here I was complaining of edge of the seat syndrome and I have gotten behind in my reading. I come on and find four, count 'em, four new chapters to read! Yeah! Thanks, Ashatan!
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Post by bjobsessed on Dec 4, 2006 19:10:32 GMT -5
You know, it must be hard to realize the world goes on without you even though you're there. The fact that they're all miming must really bother him a bit. Always wondering what they really thought, whether they agreed with him or thought he'd lost it. That would make me self-conscious for a while. Good thing he's got Karen and her honesty.
Can't wait to see how the interrogation plays out. Knowing Jim, he'll find a way to get the info he needs out of the perp.
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Post by Dreamfire on Dec 4, 2006 19:49:27 GMT -5
Wow, here I was complaining of edge of the seat syndrome and I have gotten behind in my reading. I come on and find four, count 'em, four new chapters to read! Yeah! Thanks, Ashatan! I felt a little guilty, imagining you with tension in your lower back, your hand aching from holding onto your seat, it's happened to me so many times before; so I topped up. Hope you enjoy these four. Girls, I don't want to overload the buffet so let me know when you are ready for some more. Love N |
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