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Post by Chris on Jun 1, 2007 16:31:33 GMT -5
You know, Ash, you have to let them find Jim soon or he'll not even be alive when they finally find him...  Love Jim and Tom comparing notes and Jim's descriptions of the women he's known  Ohh, and Karen and Jim, bad, bad, bad!!! How about I karma you?? Would that make them find the Blond Dude soon??? "I'm a little frustrated here"  (You do know what all this means right?? That this is one very well written fanfic  ) Take care and keep smiling - Chris  |
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Post by hoosier on Jun 1, 2007 17:54:33 GMT -5
Here I was feeling particularly sorry for myself because there was no chapter 5 and then I see its because of your birthday so never mind.  I find myself biting my nails yet again with a cliff-hanger! Your ability to sustain the suspense never ceases to amaze me. Wow! It was a little dishearting to see that no one even missed Jim until he didn't show for work. Does Mary Beth have an accomplice, someone gulliable like Eric to do her dirty work? She must because I can not see her toting an unconscious Jim around. And the two guys from MPU  Like Karen, I would like to just leap across that desk and strangle them. Argh! |
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Post by Dreamfire on Jun 1, 2007 19:12:24 GMT -5
Here I was feeling particularly sorry for myself because there was no chapter 5 and then I see its because of your birthday so never mind. Here you go Hoosier, Like the postman I deliver come rain hail, sun or birthday, just had a sleep in is all!I find myself biting my nails yet again with a cliff-hanger! Your ability to sustain the suspense never ceases to amaze me. Wow! It was a little dishearting to see that no one even missed Jim until he didn't show for work. Does Mary Beth have an accomplice, someone gulliable like Eric to do her dirty work? She must because I can not see her toting an unconscious Jim around. And the two guys from MPU Like Karen, I would like to just leap across that desk and strangle them. Argh! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D n
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Post by rducasey on Jun 1, 2007 21:42:40 GMT -5
Miguel pulled out his binoculars, not a Coyote but a dog. Now, you can think what you will of Miguel, for trying to make extra by showing off the toilet of the city, but he was a good man and went to help the dog.
Thank you Miquel! And please hurry.
Thanks N, for another great chapter. Now if I bought you a case of Tim Tams would you post another chapter really soon?
Speaking of Tim Tams, it's late. I'm really hungry and that picture that Lori posted, oh my gosh, my mouth is watering.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 1, 2007 23:03:06 GMT -5
Miguel pulled out his binoculars, not a Coyote but a dog. Now, you can think what you will of Miguel, for trying to make extra by showing off the toilet of the city, but he was a good man and went to help the dog.Thank you Miquel! And please hurry. Thanks N, for another great chapter. Now if I bought you a case of Tim Tams would you post another chapter really soon? Speaking of Tim Tams, it's late. I'm really hungry and that picture that Lori posted, oh my gosh, my mouth is watering. Wait just a darn minute......."toilet of a city"  How did I miss that one? HEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Post by Dreamfire on Jun 1, 2007 23:14:45 GMT -5
No need to get alarmed Dearie, read it carefully... Toilet of THE city. Every city has a toilet and thank goodness or we'd all be living in Miguel pulled out his binoculars, not a Coyote but a dog. Now, you can think what you will of Miguel, for trying to make extra by showing off the toilet of the city, but he was a good man and went to help the dog.Thank you Miquel! And please hurry. Thanks N, for another great chapter. Now if I bought you a case of Tim Tams would you post another chapter really soon? Speaking of Tim Tams, it's late. I'm really hungry and that picture that Lori posted, oh my gosh, my mouth is watering. Wait just a darn minute......."toilet of a city" How did I miss that one? HEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Post by krissie on Jun 2, 2007 3:16:31 GMT -5
Ah, happy sigh... Reading this was a fantastic way to start my Saturday.  So... Jim is on the cusp of being rescued, Mary Beth appears to have snared another man into helping her with her evil deeds (what do they see in her, anyway?), and the squad are being wonderfullly protective of their own. Oh, and I want to shake the Missing Persons people! (Karen, I feel your frustration.) Keep it coming, please! I think I might have to send you some more karma, just because... Krissie |
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Post by matilda on Jun 2, 2007 6:15:52 GMT -5
Workplace harrassment, you go Ashatan!
Thanks heaps matey.
Matilda
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Post by Kasman on Jun 2, 2007 7:42:57 GMT -5
Great stuff, mate. ;D
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Post by hoosier on Jun 2, 2007 17:22:58 GMT -5
Oh A, everyone deserves the chance to sleep in! Another great chapter! Those darn MPU guys.  They are so stuck on Jim being suicidal that they will not get out there and pound the pavement. Either they are brilliant (which I just can't believe) or they got sent there as punishment. How did Miguel get another boat? A friend's? Will he save Jim? If he does, he deserves a better job than hauling smelly old trash from the city! |
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Post by krissie on Jun 3, 2007 3:34:39 GMT -5
More progress made... Quick question, though: did that harness they found belong to Hank or to the labrador? And if it belonged to Hank, why would it still have been in the dumpster after Jim had been emptied out of it? Maybe I'm answering my own question here. Maybe someone in the park found it lying around and tossed it, not knowing what it was. But then, what did MB and her sidekick do with Hank? Did they almost-kill him, too, and dump him in the dumpster, or did Hank loyally follow Jim to the landfill? And if Hank followed Jim, then who took off the harness? Argh!!!! Too much excitement! Too many questions! Not that I want to wish my weekend away, but roll on tomorrow! Krissie |
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Post by Dreamfire on Jun 3, 2007 19:17:52 GMT -5
More progress made... Quick question, though: did that harness they found belong to Hank or to the labrador? It was Hankie-babes. And if it belonged to Hank, why would it still have been in the dumpster after Jim had been emptied out of it? Maybe I'm answering my own question here. Maybe someone in the park found it lying around and tossed it, not knowing what it was. You got it. But then, what did MB and her sidekick do with Hank? Did they almost-kill him, too, and dump him in the dumpster, or did Hank loyally follow Jim to the landfill? And if Hank followed Jim, then who took off the harness? Jim always took it off when Hank went off for his business and that night he just hung it on the edge of the bench. Argh!!!! Too much excitement! Too many questions! For the rest you just have to hang on, Krissie.Not that I want to wish my weekend away, but roll on tomorrow! Here it comes.
(Would it be better if I posted all at once instead of stringing it out? I'm just following tradition here.) N Krissie
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Post by rducasey on Jun 3, 2007 20:26:50 GMT -5
More progress made... Quick question, though: did that harness they found belong to Hank or to the labrador? It was Hankie-babes. And if it belonged to Hank, why would it still have been in the dumpster after Jim had been emptied out of it? Maybe I'm answering my own question here. Maybe someone in the park found it lying around and tossed it, not knowing what it was. You got it. But then, what did MB and her sidekick do with Hank? Did they almost-kill him, too, and dump him in the dumpster, or did Hank loyally follow Jim to the landfill? And if Hank followed Jim, then who took off the harness? Jim always took it off when Hank went off for his business and that night he just hung it on the edge of the bench. Argh!!!! Too much excitement! Too many questions! For the rest you just have to hang on, Krissie.Not that I want to wish my weekend away, but roll on tomorrow! Here it comes.
(Would it be better if I posted all at once instead of stringing it out? I'm just following tradition here.) N Krissie Oh poor Krissie, she'll be late for work again tomorrow. Another great chapter N, and I already feel better now that he has gotten out of that dump. You better not post it all at once or Krissie will not make it to work until Tuesday. Hint hint...two chapters a day would be nice. |
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Post by Katryna on Jun 3, 2007 20:36:09 GMT -5
Another great chapter N, and I already feel better now that he has gotten out of that dump. You better not post it all at once or Krissie will not make it to work until Tuesday. Hint hint...two chapters a day would be nice. I heartily agree - another great chapter! I also will sleep better tonight knowing that Jim is safely away from those rats!!! My vote is for one chapter a day, just as you have been doing. |
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Post by rducasey on Jun 3, 2007 20:54:42 GMT -5
Another great chapter N, and I already feel better now that he has gotten out of that dump. You better not post it all at once or Krissie will not make it to work until Tuesday. Hint hint...two chapters a day would be nice. I heartily agree - another great chapter! I also will sleep better tonight knowing that Jim is safely away from those rats!!! My vote is for one chapter a day, just as you have been doing. OK OK I will go along with that too. It's fun looking forward to a chapter a day. I hope this story is about 50 chapters long. |
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Like Karen, I would like to just leap across that desk and strangle them. Argh!
They are so stuck on Jim being suicidal that they will not get out there and pound the pavement. Either they are brilliant (which I just can't believe) or they got sent there as punishment.