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Post by shmeep on Sept 1, 2005 11:57:34 GMT -5
Hello again, everyone! Yes, I suppose I had another one in me after all and you can find it here: www.fanfiction.net/s/2561502/1/Please feel free to post a review/feedback at that site. |
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Post by Duchess of Lashes on Sept 1, 2005 16:57:25 GMT -5
Oh, Good! I get to be the first one to leave feedback here for Smeep's latest fanfic. Although she already knows how I feel about it (SHUT UP!), I have to tell all that I think it's (to coin a phrase) ABSOLUTELY brilliant! An easy read, well written and she has captured so much; the torn emotions, the insecurities, the sadness, the joy, it's all there! ENJOY everyone because this one is GREAT!
LongLashes
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Post by mlm828 on Sept 1, 2005 17:44:35 GMT -5
I second longlashes' comments -- another outstanding and moving piece of writing.
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Post by Eyphur on Sept 1, 2005 17:44:57 GMT -5
It's great, I love it. I live for fanfic, a new one just makes my day.
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Post by rducasey on Sept 1, 2005 17:45:13 GMT -5
Oh, Good! I get to be the first one to leave feedback here for Smeep's latest fanfic. Although she already knows how I feel about it (SHUT UP!), I have to tell all that I think it's (to coin a phrase) ABSOLUTELY brilliant! An easy read, well written and she has captured so much; the torn emotions, the insecurities, the sadness, the joy, it's all there! ENJOY everyone because this one is GREAT! LongLashes Lori, you are right, this is great. Congratulations Shmeep on a wonderful fanfic. More seasons of Blind Justice could have brought the Dunbars through so much and thanks to you we are able to realize this. I loved it and was so moved by it. Thank you! |
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Post by hoosier on Sept 2, 2005 17:49:03 GMT -5
Loved your story! The Dunbars expecting--how wonderful! You captured all of Jim's concerns. And it was great how Christies recognized them and tried to reassure him that he would be a fantastic dad. Can't wait for more---there will be more, please say there will be more!!!
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Post by sport57 on Sept 3, 2005 9:54:46 GMT -5
Absolutely (sorry, just had to use it) agree with everyone! Always wondered what Jim would think and now we know. Definitely want to see the next chapter!
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Post by montrealslp on Sept 3, 2005 12:48:41 GMT -5
Hey Shmeep... at the top of this fic you said "Chapter 1".... "I'm so glad you said that." (Imagine me saying that while sitting at the coffee table eating Chinese from the carton with chopsticks! hehe. But seriously, I'm led to believe there will be more chapters to come!!! YAY!!! I can hardly wait to see how this plays out... it's gonna be so much fun! I wanna run to the mall and start shopping for pink and blue! haha!
Great job on the fic, Shmeep... I love it! -Myra
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Post by maggiethecat on Sept 3, 2005 16:12:27 GMT -5
Amen to all the comments. Keep 'em coming, Oh Mighty Shmeepster. Sensitive and intiuitive and . . . of course . . . beautifully written.
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Post by shmeep on Sept 3, 2005 19:27:57 GMT -5
Thank you all for the great feedback! That really means a lot to me, especially coming from such a talented group as this.
Just so you know, I have posted Chapter 2, but the link to it got sent to my work email and, since it isn't showing up at the site yet, I don't know if you'll be able to read it right this moment. Perhaps a certain gifted fic writer who claims to have long lashes can post the link to it that she got here (hint hint). But it should show up over there in a few hours even without the link.
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Post by Duchess of Lashes on Sept 3, 2005 19:38:56 GMT -5
HAH! First again. I left this review on the FanFic site, but here it is again:
No let down with Chapter Two - it's wonderful!
The tables are turned a bit, withdrawing the focus from what Jim thinks is the most important issue, that of being a blind father, to what Dr. Galloway perceives to be the issue - Amazing job. I love Dr. Galloway's line, "Did it ever occur to you that I learn the most about you from what you don't say?" So true.
Keep it coming!
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Post by mlm828 on Sept 3, 2005 20:25:31 GMT -5
The link to Chapter 2 is: www.fanfiction.net/s/2561502/2/I tried the link for chapter 1 and substituted "2" for "1" at the end, and it worked. An excellent continuation of the story. I don't want to give anything away, so I'll just say Dr. Galloway is a very wise man. |
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Post by anna on Sept 3, 2005 20:26:39 GMT -5
But it should show up over there in a few hours even without the link. A few HOURS? I think that you overestimate the patience of your fans. |
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Post by shmeep on Sept 3, 2005 20:42:04 GMT -5
The link to Chapter 2 is: www.fanfiction.net/s/2561502/2/I tried the link for chapter 1 and substituted "2" for "1" at the end, and it worked. An excellent continuation of the story. I don't want to give anything away, so I'll just say Dr. Galloway is a very wise man. Yay! You're so smart, coming up with that link yourself. Thank you for doing that. I couldn't even access Chapter 2. Thanks for posting it. And Anna, thanks for being impatient. |
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Post by doobrah on Sept 4, 2005 13:55:03 GMT -5
Excelente! You really got Galloway and the relationship right on the money. I'm assuming there will be a chapter 3?
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