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Post by maggiethecat on Sept 4, 2005 22:48:14 GMT -5
You bet, there had better be a Chapter 3 . . . and 4 . . . and oh, just keep on keepin' on!
I have been mourning the absense of The Good Doctor since "Seoul Man" first aired (those three minutes at the beginning of "Dance With Me" where Christie cut him off at the knees don't really count), and this was a glorious treat -- thank you!
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Post by shmeep on Sept 4, 2005 23:02:23 GMT -5
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Post by anna on Sept 4, 2005 23:28:24 GMT -5
Well, I won't spoil it for anyone who hasn't read it yet - but THAT was certainly unexpected!
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Post by mlm828 on Sept 5, 2005 0:08:01 GMT -5
Oh, shmeep, you definitely know how to make the Dunbars' lives interesting! Loved chapter 3, looking forward to chapter 4.
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Post by awlrite4now on Sept 5, 2005 2:04:36 GMT -5
Hank will be jealous!
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Post by rducasey on Sept 5, 2005 5:50:10 GMT -5
Oh Shmeep it's like Christmas morning when there's a new fanfic by you. I am so loving this. That Jimmy, what a guy!!!!!
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Post by doobrah on Sept 6, 2005 8:42:15 GMT -5
WHOA!! Perfect.
I'm sitting here LMAO!
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Post by shmeep on Sept 7, 2005 8:44:46 GMT -5
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Post by maggiethecat on Sept 7, 2005 9:29:49 GMT -5
Amazing, as usual! Full of humor and style and genuine humor, with a wonderfully rich emotional content. The dialogue crackles, and is soooooo realistic and specific to these characters.
And yeah, get 'em away from that dopey Esther and back to Dr. G where they belong! She may know couples but he knows cops (and Jim) and that's more germane to their situation.
Great job, again.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 7, 2005 10:26:56 GMT -5
Shmeep? I LOVE IT!!!! ;D
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Post by hoosier on Sept 9, 2005 17:58:26 GMT -5
I am soo happy to see Galloway again. I miss the guy! I don't like to use the term "embracing his blindness", but seeing Jim learning to adapt to his limitations so that he can "see" his nephew was beautiful. Can't wait for more.
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Post by shmeep on Sept 10, 2005 11:51:42 GMT -5
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Post by Duchess of Lashes on Sept 10, 2005 12:19:53 GMT -5
What can I say except that this is another well-written installment in this little journey the Dunbar's are on. As much as there is the promise of something so wonderful, there are still those pesky little doubts, whether perceived by Jim or planted there by someone else! But there is also support from a most improbable source - I like that little twist.
Keep it coming, Smeep - it's excellent per usual!
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Post by mlm828 on Sept 10, 2005 17:02:09 GMT -5
I am enjoying this story so much. You have done such an excellent job of portraying Jim's sometimes conflicting emotions and others' reactions to his impending fatherhood. More, please!
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Post by shmeep on Sept 12, 2005 13:08:48 GMT -5
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