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Post by greenbeing on Dec 6, 2005 20:42:36 GMT -5
Jim wasn't having much fun in the other one. He needed to relax  Nothing fancy, no nanoing, just for fun. --GB |
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Post by bjobsessed on Dec 7, 2005 2:17:53 GMT -5
Sounds like it will be fun. Anything involving Sonny is unpredictable. You've made him sound and act just like the show. I can just hear him saying all this and going on and on with every little detail you didn't want to know.
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Post by rducasey on Dec 7, 2005 6:02:54 GMT -5
Oh it's fun to see Sonny again. You make us think what could have been with a new season. I can just see Jim's reactions to Sonny's words. I love how he had to put his head down so Sonny would not see him laughing. His own mother, too funny. And hubba....hubba....on seeing Christie. Can't wait for more.
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Post by shmeep on Dec 7, 2005 19:21:47 GMT -5
Well, here's the word of the day: Fun.
I finally got a chance to read this today and it was a wonderful and light take on the story. You really nailed Sonny's personality!
I also like the title.
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Post by anna on Feb 5, 2006 18:56:01 GMT -5
Yay! Chapter 2! It's good to see that you have rested up from Messiah Josiah and that you are back and in great form.
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Post by bjobsessed on Feb 5, 2006 20:37:39 GMT -5
Hey! I thought you forgot about this one. Glad you didn't. Loved it as always.
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Post by Eyphur on Feb 5, 2006 22:42:09 GMT -5
Yea! New fanfic! *Does new fanfic happy dance*. I like how this is going so far. After the first chapter I thought this was going to be solely focused on Sonny so it's nice to see them working a case too. I love a good fanfic, the longer the better, and I think this is soon to be one of my favorites.
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Post by Eyphur on Feb 15, 2006 22:58:29 GMT -5
Yippee! New chapter! I just love it. Your stories have so may intricate layers. Can't wait for chapter 4!
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Post by bjobsessed on Feb 16, 2006 0:31:13 GMT -5
Great stuff! Loved the "geriatic perp." Made me smile.  |
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Post by Eyphur on Feb 17, 2006 1:11:28 GMT -5
I'm delighted to find a new chapter so soon. I now have a smile like this ;D. Keep the the great work!
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Post by bjobsessed on Feb 17, 2006 7:52:53 GMT -5
Great job. Not often you find a story, real or not, involving an elderly gentleman. Makes it interesting. Keep it coming. ;D
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Post by bjobsessed on Feb 18, 2006 20:37:31 GMT -5
Glad you decide to post it. I got a real kick out of the teasing b/t Jim and Karen and the kissing dead.  |
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Post by bjobsessed on Feb 22, 2006 21:36:06 GMT -5
Good chapter. I think you really captured Jim's struggle with Christie having a party with all her fashion friends. I wouldn't like a party like that either.
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Post by rducasey on Feb 22, 2006 22:08:20 GMT -5
Another excellent chapter Dawn. We got so used to Christie and Jim's fights and you captured them perfectly. It was really interesting to revisit Clay's party and really hear how Jim felt about it. And I must say, I felt a pang of sadness as Jim reached for Hank's harness as his only source of freedom. I love this story. Thanks!
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Post by Eyphur on Feb 22, 2006 22:51:49 GMT -5
Wow. I love how you have captured the Jim/Christie relationship. You do it so perfectly. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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