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Post by mlm828 on Mar 27, 2007 22:36:22 GMT -5
All the time I was wondering if Jim will suddenly flash back to the bank. No real reason except that it involves an armored car robbery. Karma to you, hoosier! You "called it -- day one."  |
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Post by hoosier on Mar 28, 2007 18:24:30 GMT -5
All the time I was wondering if Jim will suddenly flash back to the bank. No real reason except that it involves an armored car robbery. Karma to you, hoosier! You "called it -- day one."  |
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Post by mlm828 on Mar 29, 2007 17:45:55 GMT -5
Chapter Six has been posted, in the Fan Fiction section here, and at ff.net: Chapter Six |
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Post by bjobsessed on Mar 29, 2007 19:35:27 GMT -5
Wow! Another action packed chapter. Must be hard for Jim to go through all the emotions of the bank all over again. Like he said, only good thing is he should get to take him down. Maybe that will give him some closure.
I knew Matt was dead when he agreed to meet Frank. He is one bad guy.
As always, can't want for the next one.
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Post by krissie on Mar 30, 2007 12:49:02 GMT -5
Wow! Another action packed chapter. Must be hard for Jim to go through all the emotions of the bank all over again. Like he said, only good thing is he should get to take him down. Maybe that will give him some closure. I knew Matt was dead when he agreed to meet Frank. He is one bad guy. As always, can't want for the next one. Yep, I also thought that Matt might as well have had a huge target painted on his chest! I think I'd have been disappointed if Frank hadn't... well... you know. I'd have thought it out of character from the way you'd portrayed him so far. I'm still happily enjoying this. Actually, I'm more than happy. I'm impatient for more... and more... and more... which means that you are definitely doing something right. (Probably also means that I'm greedy, but, hey.) Krissie |
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Post by Chris on Mar 30, 2007 16:06:19 GMT -5
I was at work when I saw that the next chapter had been posted. I had to read it although I had to leave ten minutes later and whoa, what a chapter!!! I keep wondering if it will be possible for Jim to keep the story about Terry shooting himself a secret??? Jim is not going to tell, neither is Karen nor Christie but what about Terry.... Maybe he will come forward and somehow make Jim take the fall for him???  Or maybe Annie knows too and now sees an opportunity to redeem her husband??? Poor Matt, he never had a chance, did he?? Very intriguing, MLM, you are a great writer  Take care and keep smiling - Chris aka DUMBO |
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Post by hoosier on Mar 30, 2007 17:20:44 GMT -5
You thought something was up when Frank did not want to meet Matt as usual. And then why Matt agreed to meet Frank later at the park? As scared as he was of his cousin, I guess the money meant more. Hmmm,wonder if we will be seeing Terry any time soon?  |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 31, 2007 15:13:17 GMT -5
Someone owes us a brilliant chapter, I believe. Give us the Easter miracle! RISE!!! RESURRECT YOURSELF!!!!! (God I need a life outside the Diocese........  ) |
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Post by bjobsessed on Mar 31, 2007 21:30:21 GMT -5
Someone owes us a brilliant chapter, I believe. Give us the Easter miracle! RISE!!! RESURRECT YOURSELF!!!!! (God I need a life outside the Diocese........ ) I need a life too cause I've been hoping and pressing refresh as much as possible all...day...long! |
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Post by mlm828 on Apr 1, 2007 1:13:19 GMT -5
You may have heard the saying, "Be careful what you ask for, because you may get it." The final chapter of "Day of Reckoning" has been posted in the Fan Fiction section here and at fanfiction.net: Chapter Seven. |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2007 8:11:06 GMT -5
WHOOPIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love when Jim gets all manly-butch - that's hot! hehe!
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Post by bjobsessed on Apr 1, 2007 8:23:27 GMT -5
Sigh. I love it! I can just picture Jim punching Frank out and standing there with the anger boiling over. Kind of like the speedbag, the dive across the table, and the fight in UTG all rolled into one.
Too bad it's over, but as another saying goes,"All good things must come to an end."
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Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2007 8:42:36 GMT -5
Sigh. I love it! I can just picture Jim punching Frank out and standing there with the anger boiling over. Kind of like the speedbag, the dive across the table, and the fight in UTG all rolled into one. Too bad it's over, but as another saying goes,"All good things must come to an end." WHAT DO YOU MEAN IT'S OVER - WHAT?  ? IT CAN'T BE - NO WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Post by bjobsessed on Apr 1, 2007 8:47:50 GMT -5
Sigh. I love it! I can just picture Jim punching Frank out and standing there with the anger boiling over. Kind of like the speedbag, the dive across the table, and the fight in UTG all rolled into one. Too bad it's over, but as another saying goes,"All good things must come to an end." WHAT DO YOU MEAN IT'S OVER - WHAT? ? IT CAN'T BE - NO WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yep. The fat lady has sung, the ship has sailed....... |
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Post by rducasey on Apr 1, 2007 9:43:08 GMT -5
Oboy another action packed chapter and WHAT a great finale. I bet he does feel good.....................and my goodness, he is blind so did not know his fingers were in that bad guys eyes as the bad guy lunged at him....too bad. "The guy should have known better then to take on Dunbar, Chief."
And another big 'thank you' to you MLM.
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