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Post by maggiethecat on Jul 7, 2007 13:11:03 GMT -5
This is just getting better and better, and full of so many delicious little touches, like the interplay with the car keys.
[glow=red,2,300]Excellent!!![/glow]
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Post by Deleted on Jul 7, 2007 21:06:51 GMT -5
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Post by krissie on Jul 8, 2007 15:14:10 GMT -5
Mlm, just a quick note to say thanks for feeding my fic craving!
Krissie
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Post by maggiethecat on Jul 8, 2007 17:51:04 GMT -5
I said it before and I'll say it again: This gets better and better. "Curiouser and curiouser," as Alice said. Chapter Three is like an onion -- we're peeling back later after layer after layer. Wonderful stuff, mlm! Sophisticated and specific and thought-provoking.  |
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Post by mlm828 on Jul 8, 2007 17:54:02 GMT -5
Sniped by mags! Yes, Chapter Three has been posted in the Fan Fiction section here.It's also at fanfiction.net: Chapter Three. |
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Post by Chris on Jul 8, 2007 17:59:13 GMT -5
That Krause guy is no good!!!! But I guess he's too smart to get caught even by our Blond Dude  Can't wait to see what happens next, great story (as always) MLM. Take care and keep smiling - Chris  |
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Post by Duchess of Lashes on Jul 8, 2007 19:55:01 GMT -5
Another well-written installment in what is, without a doubt, one of the most intriguing fics written to date! You have no problem getting your hands around a crime and manage to very effectively flesh out the details of the investigation without overwriting any of it. And of course your characterizations are well rounded and true. Keep bringing it MLM - your audience is definitely waiting!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 8, 2007 20:13:40 GMT -5
Another well-written installment in what is, without a doubt, one of the most intriguing fics written to date! You have no problem getting your hands around a crime and manage to very effectively flesh out the details of the investigation without overwriting any of it. And of course your characterizations are well rounded and true. Keep bringing it MLM - your audience is definitely waiting! With bated breath, I might add. |
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Post by bjobsessed on Jul 8, 2007 21:14:41 GMT -5
Another well-written installment in what is, without a doubt, one of the most intriguing fics written to date! You have no problem getting your hands around a crime and manage to very effectively flesh out the details of the investigation Keep bringing it MLM - your audience is definitely waiting! With bated breath, I might add. I have nothing to add except I'm sure this will bother Jim and he'll have to check it out. My own detective skills tell me we have to wait until Tuesday to find out what happens next.  |
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Post by matilda on Jul 8, 2007 22:15:55 GMT -5
Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Matilda
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Post by hoosier on Jul 10, 2007 18:19:06 GMT -5
Jim was lucky to get out of that squad before he was contaminated by Krause and his cronies! I doubt that would have ever happened but he could have been smeared by association. Hmmm, wonder if Calvin has something to do with the killing? If so, Krause and company better watch out...and that goes for Jim too.
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Post by carl1951 on Jul 10, 2007 21:02:53 GMT -5
I gotta get caught-up.
Later, Carl
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Post by mlm828 on Jul 11, 2007 22:06:24 GMT -5
Chapter Four is now posted in the Fan Fiction section here.It's also at fanfiction.net: Chapter Four. |
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Post by bjobsessed on Jul 11, 2007 23:16:20 GMT -5
Did he or didn't he? Are they all in danger? Will he come after Jim because he didn't do anything to help him years before? Why is Krause trying to delfect the investigation away from Marshall?
Tune in next time and maybe we'll find out!
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Post by maggiethecat on Jul 12, 2007 9:58:19 GMT -5
I know I'm being repetitive here, but this just gets better and better. The way the case is unfolding, Marty's little shots, Fisk's conversation with Krause (Now, there's someone who needs sensitivity training.  ), the atmosphere in the darkened apartment when Christie comes home at the end of the chapter . . . . . . pure bliss. (And on a purely personal note, the line about not needing to stand up to fire a gun reminded me of Miss Mary and her "darling little Glock." Heh.) I can't wait to see how this is going to play out.  |
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), the atmosphere in the darkened apartment when Christie comes home at the end of the chapter . . . 