Meet the New Boss

[mlm828]

I've posted the first chapter of a new story, "Meet the New Boss," here and at ff.net: www.fanfiction.net/s/3345669/1/

After almost two years on the job, Jim is suddenly transferred to another precinct.

[bjobsessed]

That was great! I can't wait to find out why Jim is so uptight about his new boss. Must be something big considering Jim's reaction. Wonder how he'll feel leaving the place where he's proven himself everyday for the last two years, even if not everyone totally accepts him.

[rducasey]

oh please don't make us wait too long to find out about this new assignment. Excellent writing.

[Dreamfire]

Wow! I feel like I am hanging off the edge of a cliff with my fingernails.

First a real juicy case and then a transfer! I expect that would be fairly close to number one on Jim's list of traumatic things that could happen, I mean, he's settled in to working with Karen, the guys in the squad don't doubt he can do his job -it's got me traumatised just thinking about it!


You've got me checking your last stories to see whether drag out the chapters or not! LOL!

A great read, can't wait for the update.

A

[Dreamfire]

ashatan said:

You've got me checking your last stories to see whether drag out the chapters or not! LOL!

A

Okay I checked your other stories out, and as well as being prolific you are fast at posting the ends of stories so I can hold my breath without danger! Phew, Thank goodness you do not enjoy torturing us with cliffhangers and long breaks!

Love
N

[mlm828]

Chapter 2 is up, in the Fan Fiction section here, and at ff.net: www.fanfiction.net/s/3345669/2/

You will find out what happens at the new precinct, but not yet.

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mlm828 said:

Chapter 2 is up, in the Fan Fiction section here, and at ff.net: www.fanfiction.net/s/3345669/2/

You will find out what happens at the new precinct, but not yet.

I wanna know NOW!

[Chris]

This is such a treat

I can hardly wait to find out what happens next, that Krause guy sounds really nasty

And I would like to say to all of You, who writes those great fanfics, You are all so talented.

I am truly amazed of You Guys, I have been reading through all Your stories and they are all true "Blind Justice" stories.
The way the characters are portrayed, the interaction between them and the crimes follows the legacy of those priceless 13 episodes we got to see.

So please, everybody, keep them coming whenever you feel inspired and has the time to write those great stories for us, they are highly appreciated

So take care and keep smiling You are so talented!!
- Chris

[maggiethecat]

I've only read Chapter One so far but mlm, you've done it again! Sharp and smart and terse, and the characters shine with realism. LOVE Jim's musing on the anniversary -- what a pleasure that must have been to write.

You go, girl! And keep it coming. I'm off to wallow in Chapter Two . . . .

[hoosier]

What can I add? Its great to see another story from you! Like Maggie, I have only read chapter one so far and one thing has me wondering--why the chief of d's has decided to reassign Dunbar now, today with absolutely no warning? This can't be good. Please, don't keep us on pins and needles.

[bjobsessed]

divinemrse said:

mlm828 said:

Chapter 2 is up, in the Fan Fiction section here, and at ff.net: www.fanfiction.net/s/3345669/2/

You will find out what happens at the new precinct, but not yet.

I wanna know NOW!

I'm with you! I can just guess why Jim got all tense when Krause's name was mentioned. What a jerk! And what a thing to see as a young cop.

I laughed yesterday when Natascha said she was hanging off a cliff and that she'd checked to see how fast you post, but I think I'm hanging now.

Not too long ok? Hanging by your fingernails in hard work. ;D

[shmeep]

This one is ambitious! So complex and with so many possible conclusions. I'm glad to see you writing again--and writing a multi-parter. It's very intriguing so far. I'm glad I finally had a chance to read it. I saw it up over the last couple of days, but was too busy at work to read it. Now I'm all caught up.

[hoosier]

You knew Jim and Kraus had to have a history and a bad one at that. What a jerk! And a dirty cop to boot! Oh, I just know he is up to no good. Wonder what he has on the chief to get Jim transfered to his squad?

Sidebar--Jim being baaddd! Scoping out a fellow officer! Really!

[Dreamfire]

Sorry to take so long to send you thanks on your second chapter. I actually held my breath until you posted and, blue faced, sucked in the whole thing in one wonderful enjoyable, tantilising breath!

I have never been curious as to what Jim was like before the got shot, but this sneal peak was sooo exciting!

However, I am still finding shooting pains stinging up my arms from hanging on to find out what happens to our blonde dude and why he's been transferred. BJO says it must be Tunney has it in for him, Mom's 5th says he should go see his union rep and stop it, me, I just want to know what happens and why?

A new environment, scoping it out in the dead of night, the inevitable bumps and scrapes and the low expectations of those who think it must mean he is incompetent! Oh my goodness, I can't wait!

My mind is churning with questions, WHY? HOW? FOR HOW LONG? Will karen throw up a stink? Or is there secret relief that he's gone and things can get back to "normal"? If it's temporary and he comes back, will anything have changed?
Oh MLM! This is the best fic yet!

Love Natascha

P.S. Will there be someone who is willing to act as a sighted guide or will he be fully reliant on Hank. Will be get to see some cane travel? Oh my goodness, will they try and stick him behind a desk, send him out alone? This is like sitting at a 5 star restaurant and ordering chef's surprise!

[Dreamfire]

Hey guys, MLM is back on the board! Maybe she's posting!